| Reviews for Ocean Stars Falling |
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  4Kids Dub Lol chapter 1 . 8/18 She only knows about One Piece from the 4Kids Dub. Is she going to assume that the marines will attack her water guns and that nobody smokes? lol. |
 PasiveNox chapter 2 . 8/17 Great chapter wonderful |
| PasiveNox chapter 1 . 8/17 Great chapter and start |
| PrimalWhiteStar chapter 27 . 9/18/2023 Thanks for the Great Chapter and Story |
| acowles02 chapter 1 . 9/7/2023 Lol nom issue |
| acowles02 chapter 1 . 9/7/2023 Please dont tell me all the spoken words are in italics |
| realfan16 chapter 14 . 9/6/2023 Overall Epic chap. Characterization was ayt. |
| realfan16 chapter 12 . 9/2/2023 finally another POV. It's refreshing to see another's thought sequence for once |
| Riku Uzumaki chapter 27 . 7/29/2023 Ah, I see. So Roshi and Son Goku have been actively fighting off Kaguya/Kannon's presence in their minds from the start due to their knowledge of spiritual matters while everyone else was too confused about the voice and their situation to even get a clue as to what was going on and just decided to make the best of their situations. This puts Roshi and Son Goku in the perfect position to become the MVPs of this battle against Kaguya/Kannon since they have established themselves as outside her immediate grasp and can potentially destroy her body while her mind is distracted by the other Tailed Beasts and Jinchurriki. |
| Wabbayack22 chapter 2 . 7/29/2023 Isnt she a konoha ninja? Youd think they would have experience dropping from high heights to the ground. I actually haven’t read the breath story this character comes from since it hasnt been updated since 2019 but it kinda seems like kei is like… not main character energy at all. Like sakura could definitely take her place and do it better. Probably a quick judgement without a ton of info backing it but Kei seems kinda…. Lackluster? |
| WindbornesWord chapter 27 . 7/28/2023 Yeah Imu is a complete unknown, still good to see the Beast Pirates get beat up. Fuck those guys. |
| Riku Uzumaki chapter 26 . 7/26/2023 Oh good, you're back, and it looks like Kaguya is finally making her move. Looks like we finally have an idea as to why it took so long for Son Goku to finally show up. He probably had an idea as to what was happening and deliberately kept his connection with the other Biju as loose as possible so as to avoid getting caught in the trap set for them. |
| WindbornesWord chapter 26 . 7/25/2023 Figures that the sole Sage would know what the hell is going on. Dammit Goku. |
| Silverwingzz chapter 11 . 4/19/2023 The one issue I can see is the whole speed of the biju thing. They should’ve easily been able to catch up but you probably didn’t let them for plot. The other thing is that they should’ve shot a biju bomb at the ship after they found out ace wasn’t on it. |
| Silverwingzz chapter 10 . 4/19/2023 Kei is really starting to piss me off with how she’s acting. |