Thank you for this chapter! This story never fails to make me smile. I would love to read another Ace or Kushina perspective!

"Son of the sea," eh? Lol Kei's still getting incorrectly gender-cast.

This is actually a comment for chafter 12 but here I go.

Aces and Kei and Yugitos pov on killing a lot of people remind me of Doflamingos quote "Pirates are evil? The Marines are righteous? These terms have always changed throughout the course of history! Kids who have never seen peace and kids who have never seen war have different values! Those who stand at the top determine what's wrong and what's right! This very place is neutral ground! Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will! Whoever wins this war becomes justice!"

Specifically this part "Kids who have never seen peace and kids who have never seen war have different values!"
Ace has never been in a war or been a soldier but that's most of what Kei and Yugito know and they have very different morals because of this.
Anyways.
So this is a comment for chapter 13 now
Idk some more WB povs would be nice. Maybe a Teach pov I'm curious about Gaara and Fuss experiences with the strawhats and the same with KushIna and Killer B with Shanks.
Also Naruto and the revolutionaries
I think a short random marine or guard pov would be funny because they just got blindsided
Idk really I'll be happy with any pov or extra scene you want to make. So just write what you get inspiration for !
Also whole chapter or put within chapters either is fine by me!

I love this crossover! And just the sheer awesomeness of Tailed Beasts and their partners roaming the OP world and making a mess out of the time line (and Grand Line borders, and Marines, and Magellan and the rest of the World Government's shiteshow..)
Fu and Gaara being Straw Hats is just perfect, as is Naruto working with the Revolutionaries, and Han staying at a farm!
Anyways, I like how all of them were interacting with the others and the OP characters. I'm just a little afraid of discovering where Roshi and Son Goku are, because my paranoia has been screaming "Marines!" or "Kaidou!" or "Big Mom!" for a while now and I'm scared, haha..
Thank you for writing this, I love CYB and all the little extras you give us!

Obviously, the best part is Naruto being covered head to toe in Den Den Mushi.

and Luffy swan-diving out of a moving vehicle... seriously that boy.

Mission Impossible? With that many jinchuuriki and tailed beasts it's more like Mission Overkill.

Seriously though, was really looking to this chapter. Like, is it weird that I'm starting to enjoy this series more than your main one? I have no idea why that happened but I do.

Anywho, looking forward to seeing the butterfly effects that are bound to show up with all this happening. And hopefully we get to Ace next chapter. Seeing Kei will be a huge relief for him.

Yay update! I'm still totally loving this fic. I don't have strong opinions on the other POVs, other than I like ones from Ace. I'd probably like Luffy too, except I think there's probably not actually that many thoughts rattling around in that cute empty head of his. Hum ... maybe Jinbae could be fun a little later on.

This chapter was just so perfect when listening to the Mission Impossible theme song on repeat lol Definitely liking the change up from canon in having the entire Straw Hat crew shop up to Impel Down. Having 6 of the tailed beasts and the hosts just taking on a supposed impenetrable fortress and the marines are going to have no idea what hit them. It's almost a shame that they couldn't do that at the war at Marine Headquarters instead because the faces of absolute shock on everyone would be so hilarious lol So looking forward to seeing how the rest of the attack goes down and if they will run into Ivankov because she is so strange and awesome lol

I'd really love to see how Naruto met up with the Revolutionaries and what he was up to with Yang Kurama. Also seeing how Kushina and Killer Bee got together and then met Shanks and his crew. Especially since Kushina and Bee definitely caused a LOT of chaos to get noticed lol Also curious to know how the people back in the shinobi world are handling the disappearances of the jinchuriki...

I've found myself really looking forward to the weekly update! Love how Kei and Ace have become friends, and her and Yugito's kinda-sorta-not quite friendship. I'd absolutely love a Yugito PoV, and Utakata as well at some point. Other than that, maybe something from the Strawhats' side?

Someone needs to draw a twelve year old Naruto covered in transponder snails right now. Brilliant.

I'm most interested in seeing a Konoha-esque POV extra about how the homies (kakaaaaaaaaaaaaashiiiiiiii) are taking the news of their loved ones being missing for MONTHS with no clues as to where they've gone.
Of course, we'll also neEED to see Ace's POV when Luffy and Kei burst through the fucking cell door/walls, possibly illuminated by light as they both either yell out to him or hold out their hands to offer help... MY HEART IS WEAK

*blinks* Damn, this is a long rescue. Also, they should totally blow up the prison

A POV from one of the original Straw Hats would be interesting. You know, meeting Gaara at Loguetown, what happened at the Sabaody Archipel, stuff like that.
Or maybe Shank's POV of Kushina and Bee.

I'm highly interested in Utakata's point of view...

Kei is a bad influence on Isobu. She really is. :)
Dominoes, or bowling pins?
On one hand, I believe the initial group could have powered through, simply by taking the direct route. On the other hand, the Straw Hats are holding their own, and the vivre card alone is worth Ace's tab. On the gripping hand, the Straw Hats are now associated with the breakout, unless Kei manages to not leave witnesses.

Chomei is the only 'butterfly' among the Tailed Beasts. If the world's largest helicopter counts as a butterfly.
If it isn't any trouble, either of Utakata or Yugito would be nice. I'm hoping Gaara and Naruto's POV lack sufficient action to be interesting. Because boring is /good/ when you are guarding escape routes.

Thank you.