Ha! Take that, Teach! And that! And that!

I liked this chapter. Thank you for allowing Kei & co to make a real difference.

As for your question, my personal preference is that the other POVs be included in the main story.

omg this is amazing. I hope we get snippets of everyone freaking out back at home xD
Kakashi will be all "where is my bae"

The World Government better feel it. I look forward to their introduction to the world. The havok, the chaos, the deliciousness!

Omg my favorite line: 'Isobu rose from the depths like an ancient god of the primordial oceans.' Sent delightful shivers down me!

I love the violence in this chapter and the complete willingness to kill! Often, so many SI OC's are more than happy to become a 'cool and awesome' ninja but don't like killing people. 'Killing is bad!'. Like WTF that is the life of a ninja. What?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

And Naruto finally appears! Yes! Though I've gotta ask, what's going on back in Konoha? With his wife, kid, and student missing Minato's got to be on the warpath trying to get them back. And the rest of the world has got to be freaking out. Nine (ten really but Naruto's status was secret) super-weapons don't just vanish, so I'm guessing things are very not good over there right now.

Naruto is going to have such exciting stories (that nobody will believe) when he gets back to school.
So close, and yet, so far.
I wonder which was more of a shock to Teach: That Kei resisted his power-drain, or that she can swim. Either way, his last thought was probably 'Not fair!'
Impel Down could not be better placed for Isobu and Saiken to raid it. Kei is going to have /fun/ with that. Hang on, Ace. The cavalry is coming.

Please insert the A-POV's where they are appropriate. If any don't fit, then please put those in a bonus section.

Thank you.

yeeeessss! i cant wait for the next chapter! and adding the povs to the chapters would be better (at least as omakes at the end of their chapter?).. otherwise it could get pretty confusing!

YES TEACH IS DEAD! Thank you for killing him off; I've been looking forward to his canon-death for too long.
A little upset that Ace isn't rescued yet, but I'm not really surprised. Anticipating the chaos that will go down at Impel Down! Hopefully Luffy's friend Bon-chan gets rescused too? And maybe Buggy if you remember to add him in. X'D

So Naruto was with Sabo huh, I don't approve of them using Naruto as a solo-tanker but I guess this will be what enables the long-awaited reunion of our favourite ASL brothers!

As for your bonus chapters: I would love to read them sooner rather than later. :D but if it's too messy then I'll wait for them after the main plot ends.

Thank you so much for the awesome chapter!

Jumping up & down in my head. I was going to sleep when I checked ur profile and saw this. Yehey no longer drabbles. First time I read a ff that killed that villain Blackbeard. didn't like all previous keeping enemies particularly Blackbeard alive like weeds coming back. Excited for ImpelDown arc. How will they react to Ivankov. hehehe

Man I just want Ace to be OK and to meet Naruto. Since I think they'd get along great since Naruto is so much like Luffy and also they can both bond over their love of orange. Anyways loved the chapter can't wait til next Friday to see what happens. I just love love this crossover keep up the good work !

I love Isobu squishing teach and I really do hope he is proper dead that just makes everything so much sweeter and I can totally see Isobu as like a Pontus type character just the embodiment of the sea itself

I am seriously loving this AU with One Piece and just how much detail you have put into blending the 2 worlds without it seeming like pure chaos. The reunion with Kei and Naruto was just so wonderful because poor boy gets into too much trouble without any supervision. Though I would seriously be interested to know how Naruto and the Revolutionary meeting went since Dragon seems so serious lol Also loving the reunions with all the tailed beasts, so adorable seeing Matatabi grooming Kurama like a mother cat would! Beyond happy to see the entire group just bring destruction to the Blackbeard pirates. Now they just have to go break into Impel Down and rescue Ace which should just go so smoothly of course lol

Naruto! *cheers* Still the same excitable, lovable, and totally not careful shinobi, I see. *beams* Yang Kurama is also as grumpy as ever. And yes, Teach is dead! *dances over his (watery) grave*

Go whoop Teach's ass!

So I knew next to nothing about One Piece before reading this. I mean, my information can be summed up in 3 points: I know it exists, it's about pirates, and the main character is named Luffy.

That said, you did a really good job in this xover cuz I never once felt lost while reading it (maybe just hella confused- but then so was Kei so meh)

Whew, it's definitely being a ride of a story! Yay for Kushina appearance-sort-of.