Reviews for Take a Walk on the Wild Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my GOD! I need a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story! It's so good! I actually started writing my own fic with a semi similar setting not too long ago over on AO3 and noticed some similarities as I started to read this one and just wanted to mention they aren't intentional and I'm in no way trying to copy this one, but thought I'd give a clarification on the off chance you ever see it. I adore this fic and I'm slowly working my way through all your fics and they're great! One of my all-time favorite jaune writers currently! |
![]() ![]() Jaune X mil was not something I knew I needed till this story. It was more than satisfying how it ended and how there relationships stayed intact. A good 7/10. One of the few story were I want read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 11: I don't know if this was intentional but I totally caught that little hint towards Within Temptation's The Howling at the beginning there |
![]() ![]() ![]() An absolute masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaune, no.. you can't give promise like that. please make him fail, I know the chapters had been released but please.. he needs to experience this failure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was super flipping cute, and really well written. Thank you for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Beacon actually need transcripts from another academy actually? I'm not saying they're a good reference material but I really doubt Ren and Nora went to an academy, I think it's more likely they just put down "We have experience fighting Grim from walking kingdom to kingdom and learning what we can." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, team RWBY always bothered me because of how over competent they are. Sure I get someone like Pyrrha being a monster in combat because she's literally famous for it, and even Blake being good as she is because she has a lot more live combat experience then anyone else between the two teams, but Yang and Ruby weren't even the top of their year in Signal if I remember right. It's just a team of Mary Sue really, I think watching them take the Ace Ops apart is what really set me off in the end, as if I can believe them taking not only a highly trained military squad like that but the best of the best? No. Also I always didn't like Yang because this particular scenario went through my head during her trailer, she started the fight for no reason and trashed the club, she should've been arrested for using her Aura for assaulting a club and aura-less people. Sure that club was a hangout for criminals but I'm also sure a lot of normal people were there too that could've gotten glass between ribs or something. Was it cool to watch? Yes. Did it make her out to be a bitch who lays hands on anyone she slightly disagrees with aura or not? Also yes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy to see this finished. Was hoping for a while that it would. Ya dun good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for coming back to finish the fic. I always hate it when an author abandons a fic and we never get a proper conclusion to the story, so I'm grateful that you managed to finish this. I wish there was a final scene between Jaune and Goodwitch as she was an antagonist for Jaune the entire story, so one final meeting discussing how much Jaune has grown would have really put a cherry on top of this story. Overall well done. |
![]() ![]() "I mean, yeah Mil's got bigger tits," Melanie continued. "But I've got a much sweeter ass. Comes from years of doing leg work". Damn, now I wish Jaune would take advantage of that ass. At least a grab is all I'm asking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah ImSoAwesome is a really awesome guy! And I don't even know him! So he's gotta be like... SuperAwesome... PLUS! ImSoSuperAwesomePLUS(exclamation mark)! |
![]() ![]() As Gordon Ramsey said "Finally some good Fucking Food" clad to see you update this finally was kinda worried. |