Such a lame outfit just give him his tracksuit and be done with it

Sakura? Sakura?" Sakura blinked and looked around.

"Huh?" Artemis smiled at the girl and leaned back.

"Finally, I've been trying to get your attention for like five minutes." The other girls laughed lightly.

"Oh...sorry," Sakura sighed and looked at her lap.

"Hey, what's wrong?" Ino asked, placing her hand on Sakura's shoulder.

"I...I just have a lot on my mind right now," Sakura said.

"Sakura, forget the wedding!" Tenten said.

"Yeah, we're doing this so that you can relax and take some time away from it," M'gann said.

"I'm actually not thinking about that," Sakura confessed.

"Then what's got you so stressed?" Raquel asked. Sakura looked around nervously. Out of all the kunoichi and heroines her eyes landed on Barbara. Barbara was looking at her in concern, her hands gripping her wheelchair. The wheelchair. Barbara had nearly died due to the same force that had killed Jason. No matter what Sakura had tried, no matter how hard she had worked herself she hadn't been able to undo the damage that the Joker had done. A shot to the back, she could heal no problem. But a shattered spine and severed nerves, that was a whole other league. She healed Barbara as best she could, but even with all that hard work, Batgirl would never fly again.

"Babs...did you hear?" Sakura asked quietly.

"Hear what?" the redhead asked, tilting her head in confusion.

"About the Red Hood," Sakura said.

"Man, even I've heard of that ass," Artemis said with a huff.

"Gotham's newest big bad, yeah, I know," Barbara responded.

"Alfred didn't call you?" Sakura whispered in shock.

"No, why?" Barbara asked.

"It's about Jason," Sakura said quietly. The heroes looked at her in shock.

"Um, who is that?" Hinata asked.

"Jason Todd, the second Robin," Zatanna explained. "He was killed by the Joker several years ago."

"What about Jason?" Barbara asked.

"I-I don't exactly have the full story right now," Sakura said. "But Bats did a DNA analysis with some of Red Hood's blood and...it was a match." Barbara's eyes widened. "Jason's alive."

"What? But how?" Artemis asked.

"Like I said, I don't have the full story," Sakura said. "You'd have to ask Batman for that."

"How's Dick?" Artemis asked.

"He was pretty shook up about it," Sakura answered. "I was too."

"I don't blame you guys," Tenten said. She looked down at her lap and tightened her hands into fists. "If Neji was suddenly alive...I wouldn't know what to think."

"Same here," Ino said. "If it were my dad, I don't know what I'd do."

"But, Red Hood's a criminal, a murderer," Barbara said.

"Yeah." Sakura nodded sadly. "Which means, he's not our Jason. Not anymore at least."

Quisiera sugerir que tal vez la historia podria impactar mucho mas de manera positiva si igual que en los Crossover Invasion y Shinobi Justice vol 1 no incprporas solamente a Naruto sino a mas personajes de Naruto

Creo que tal vez una forma incluso mejor y que incluye y incorpora mas personajes y conceptos de ambas series ( especialmente Naruto , de la que muchas veces no incorporan todos sus personajes )
que sugeriria es seguir el ejemplo de la historia Shinobi Justice Vol. 1

. La alianza entre Akatsuki y The Light
. Villanos y heroes de ambos universos trabajando juntos

La trama podria estar especialmente conformada por las peliculas de Naruto , el videojuego y comics de Young Justice , los episodios de la serie animada de Young Justice y Naruto , entre otros conceptos , asi la historia desde sinopsis hasta personajes estaria lo mas completa y seria mas amplia posible

Please come back

Buenos dias
Quiero decir que aunque tampoco esta escrita mal en el sentido en que he visto otras historias que si estan mal escritas al manejar conceptos como la ambientacion de una forma mas bien poco creible
esta historia siento que creo que podria de ciertas maneras podria ser una obra mejor escrita

Aunque no es incoherente exactamente quiero decir que falta mas histlorias donde no sea solo Naruto sino mas persponajes de la franquicia de Naruto los que aparezcan en una hisoria de Young Justice

Algo parecido a Shinobi Justice Vol 1

Cuando sale el próximo cap bro la historia es increíble

Sorry I can't read this, everything woth naruto is a glaring plot hole, you have no idea what is happening due to lack of context, you don't start stories like this, you need to start with some actual plot building, the only plot this chapter actually has is with the team and caddis (which is Canon), everything with naruto makes zero sense, who is he talking to? Kurama? You don't know because you never built that up at all, I only got through half the chapter before saying screw it, you need you get the reader with the first chapter to keep them reading but the way you did it was I'm assuming, trying to make things mysterious and you failed badly, you're supposed to keep your readers from being utterly lost on the plot (honestly the whole naruto aspect seems to have no plot at this point, it goes from no plot naruto to plot young justice rinse and repeat)...also NEVER do 'line break' you're not writing a script, you do as an example where it switches from the team to Dr Desmond 'elsewhere in the facility' or 'meanwhile in the facility' these would have been a proper scene change...do people read actual books nowadays? Please grab a new York times bestseller and see how properly done. Sorry if I'm sounding harsh but too many fanfic writers make the mistakes you have and it actually affects them negatively, they write their stories like you're reading a shopping list (I don't even give these a chance cualz they're all horribly written) or like you're reading a script for a play (nearly as bad as the first)...I guess I could include overly deep descriptions of characters which are unneeded (describing basically every stitch of clothing they are wearing, most readers completely skip these paragraphs because it's pointless bloat)...which from what I could tell you actually avoided so good on you...you only describe clothing when it pertains to a scene like say a character puts on a cocktail dress to go to a fancy restaurant since it fits into the scene rather than a character intro that is a paragraph long description that includes everything but the characters life story, lol. Hope if you read this it helps you in the future with your writing

Your story is my second favorite Naruto YJ crossover. First being Shinobi Rising.

Update please

Drag0n5on please update your stories one by one also take break

Sube el próximo capítulo hermano es muy buena está historia

He doesn't even have anything to do with Naruto, it's just an OC with the same name.

Update this soon plz

Please continue this story it’s amazing.