Reviews for New Dawn V3
Borello chapter 1 . 1/12
this work is very interesting and i hoped to read more chapter.
Sage of the Azure Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/12/2018
Interesting. Hope to read more. Though this is a thought, have you considered Ami and Fuki to be members of New Dawn? Ami could be related to either Anko or Yugao, who could have been Kushina's students, while Fuki could be an Uzumaki. (She has the red hair, and it would add an interesting and different twist.)
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
J'aime bien.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2018
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XXX777 chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
This fic is very interesting. I noticed that you made Naruto a bit like Kushina from your Naruto/Shikabane Hime crossover fic.
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 4/3/2018
Why would Fuu NEED naruto to protect her? The one tail was nearly able to decimate the village, and she's SEVEN TIMES more powerful then that!(however strong garaa is, fuu is multiple times stronger... SO she doesn't NEED protection, if anything, the village should avoid HER like the plague. Gato's goons catching her is just about LAUGHABLE, but I suppose if she went willingly to them because the village sold her... Maybe, the question becomes why would they get rid of her and open themselves up for attack from other villages.

Also if sasuke is such a pain? Just kill him.
TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 12/21/2017
Now this is one I want to see more of.
camdawg chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Please don't take out any of the xover girls you had a good varity and interesting skills they could bring to the table. Also have you thought about adding the girls from the seven mortal sins anime to your stories
Dragon0905 chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
Change the names and I'd swear I've seen this on TV somewhere... meat locker, body drop, burning buildings. Even the explosions in the background as the group watches. Been wracking my brain and still can't remember. Please tell me.
TheWhiteTitan chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
So...love the story, especially with the whole Negan personality, but how did he get Lucille? In the comics, the bat was named after Negan's wife who died from cancer. How did Naruto get his Lucille?
bladetri chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
like XD
Minase 2928 chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
like the start cant wait for more.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
My only gripe about this fic is the improper usage of the F-bomb in a few places and the overabundance of said bomb in the Hiruzen conversation at the top of the chapter. Putting "fucking" in between bat and shit, or smart and ass, disrupts the flow of the words. Also putting "fuck" or "fucking" to many times in a conversation detracts from the words "vibe". Other than those few point this is a fantastic fic.
VFSNAKE chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Awesome! This keeps getting better with each new version.
draco122 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
that was great i loved it. Also welcome back
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