Well, since I haven't read anything from you in a while, I honestly expected less cohesiveness. Just saying, you've improved leagues beyond than what I remember.
This was damn perfect by any standard.

The way the couple interacts as if their surprise session is rather casual, yet a big deal at the same time is very unique. Usually that kind of thing would be totally bypassed, but here it was acknowledged and that in itself is a big deal. Very well done, considering Pokemon/Trainer relations aren't exactly smiled upon.

The rather fun idea of him deciding to punish his girl from the beginning was foreshadowed, and truly came into play near the end, which I was definitely waiting for, and was quite satisfied to see. It was done quite good. Fire dog had to comply and make a promise in the moment to get her release. Was pretty funny. Even though she breaks her promise in the end.
Kind of curious as to what she was even doing to misbehave anyway. Heh.

The details are phenomenal, though a small complaint(if you can call it that) was there seemed to be a sentence here or there with certain position of sexual descriptions missing. Not at all an error, just my personal wishing there were more to read about that exact scene, really. Hard-pressed to find any legitimate errors, and I'm pretty good at pointing those out.

Her attitude is adorable. Fiesty, yet not overstepping her bounds of being too rude with her trainer, while still knowing what she can get away with. A beautiful canine character made here.
Really loved the handling of her horns too, those are definitely some good love handles. And she clearly loved it.
Also, the attention to noting how hot the fire-type is inside was good. That can't be ignored.

All-in-all, an absolutely flawless sex fic. Considering there was no buildup, the casual intro to the characters was very well-done. I'm not sure if these two had any stories building their styles before, but regardless this was insanely-good for a first-time read of them. I was able to realize their personalities quite easily, which is impressive. I don't know many people who can do that so well. Especially for a sex story. It's satisfying to see that.

This was amazing. And I'm sure you have many more lovely romps just like it. I'll be sure to indulge in more very soon, didn't know your style was this good, but I guess I should've known, if you know what I mean.
Great job bud.

You deserve more attention.

this was a fun lemon to read, hope you do more!

That was a fun lemon to read, hot and funny at the same time, love cinder's personality! Thanks for this, not enough houndoom lemons out there :) 10/10

I vote for yoai version with subby houndoom.

Could you ever make a yaoi version of this with the human dominating the male houndoom? It's always fun to see a male houndoom take it under the tail from a human.

hot and funny maybe he should punish her by not giving her what she is after. _

Well that was pretty...hot

nice one-shot, i rarely see houndoom lemons in here so keep it up(goddamnit Cinder)