Reviews for Funhouse
Sunshine1220 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Loved the twist at the end! Hope you plan to expand it! Thanks and good luck!
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Jesus, please continue.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Good reading
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Oh wow what a twist I so didn't see that coming I loved it
MaisieSky chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
But what does it mean? Great story.
TMart37 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I have about a million questions...

Damn.
88TwiGeek chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Wow. Can't wait to see if you continue this. Good luck.
Elise de Sallier chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Wow! That was intense! I'm guessing you're going to continue. I'll have to find some courage to read the rest. ;)
Thanks for writing.
LizziePaige chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Ooooooooh! I so did not see any of that coming! A real twist in the tale.
I'd love a continuation, but I think everybody would be dead by the end of the next chapter!
Fantastic entry, all the best in the contest :)
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Uh Oh! I am totally picturing that creepy smile in Eclipse right before she busts through Royce's hotel room.
louanne61 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
That is something I didn't expect. Good luck in the contest.
debslmac chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I hope there will be more. Loved this :)
cheshire15 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Love it
2muchtrouble chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
"Sprawled out like poison ivy over a stone surface" wonderful description! Hope you will be adding more to this one.
carmelia chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Great story!
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