Reviews for The Road So Far (this Time Around) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far, I can't wait to see what else you come up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I tell you a I SCREAMED when I realized what was going on. Last chapter the writing style was a little different, like pretty descriptive for minor events (the waitress's actions, the kid tripping, etc). I started thinking "oh this is a little like Mystery Spot, but that doesn't happen for a whole season." BOY was I BAMBOOZLED when DEAN woke up to the alarm again (and not Sam). Man, this story keeps me on my toes, even having watched the show 50 times and knowing how things are supposed to play out |
![]() ![]() ![]() More family angst excellently written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. I'm all for the daddy drama be it Dean and John fighting, Sam and John fighting, or Dean relating to Bobby, it's all great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does everyone ship the stupid brothers as gay as f uck. We all know theyre not gay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good imagery with the action. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sam is on the verge of knowing the truth. But will he remember after they come out of Dreamworld? And John has found them the great hunter that he is. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's interesting how you're reusing the episodes, but with Butterfly Effect changes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sammy jealous of the quality of his brother’s 'visions'. Typo...Something he was growing increasingly worried was his younger brother. Suddenly he was growing increasingly worried was his younger brother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. You wrote; Start with Cassius Longinus. Have you read the Casca series by Barry Sadler? They are based on a combo of history and the myth that Cassius Longinus became immortal and has remained a soldier henceforth in battles across time. They're really good, as is your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good action. Typo...that finally settled the manner. should be that finally settled the matter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Dean. So much to deal with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Favorite line...Finally, Sam mumbled, "What's a devils trap?" Son of a bitch. Seriously. How the hell had they lived long enough to make it to the end of the world? and the one about how he can claim Crowley's ideas as his own. |
![]() ![]() Ah, I completely missed this update. I'm now doing Supernatural rewatch and when I came across Andy... such wasted potential for possible funny recurring character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying your story. I read 119 pages all at once. I hope you do keep writing this. Good luck with everything. |