|Reviews for White Dogs: Perversity|
| yema22 chapter 17 . 3/30/2022
Ojalá algún día actualices, me encantoooo :)
| Mirage chapter 1 . 2/12/2021
That is where her mother does goes wrong , with letting her run around the wild with such uncut youth with potty mouth like inu. ...
She should talk with her more often about all her child's worry fears pains and tears... about what is right and what not...what to accept and where to step down firmly and with hard hands..
Teens are from what I did rad in science article ...accepted insane ...there brain by a lot of teens go just boooom ...they hunk stupid thought ...do stupid things ...let other be mean to them
..so they need someone to lead them out of it to help them see ...like with her... a modern girl way more free raised teen girl than other in her school... and she takes his verbal abuse even when she knows it is wrong just because she got a bit of survivor guilt puppy crush. ...and she wants him to love her ...even when he most of the time acts like a bad ass from youth boot camp centre ...she should just show him a mirror of his self , how he is...and then give the hell up with this wannabe puppy survivor guilt crush. ..and take care of shippou and find this little guy a youkai teacher and herself too , so she can kick inu's behimd woth not only the beads at his neck but real when he goes all bad talking again...There must be hundred of older stronger purebred demon males to find better sweated mate. ...
Look at inu's golden pedestal for kikyou ...I tell you ...when she would have survived and they would have married...he would have hated her or disliked her at least half a year later , with how cold she is ...anti youkai...and all that...how could she be a good mate and mother when she possible would dislike part hanyou children ...or nagging at him for how he does not have better work and bring home more money and food and better clothing ...or how he smells or such... maybe even bevor they come together...maybe a month more or so ...then he would have seen more of her faults and wrongs...
I mean kikyou got training since small child ...Kagome not...
There is something like a saying that goes like this... a team/ pack or what ever is only as strong as the most weak in its group. And how they work with this . ...and help out this one weaker. So when they don't teach and protect the weakest one , help them grow stronger ...then they and the leader are the true weak ones...or something like this.
| baby-kitsune9 chapter 17 . 8/12/2018
this is really really really good, please update!
| Coolfire30 chapter 17 . 6/21/2017
... i am in awe at your story...the way that you write is... is.. just so perfect...i love how you completely catches how Sesshoumaru thinks and what not... i'm just sooooo amazed at you... you've just earnt another fan... thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us.
| El Proyecto Above Dawn chapter 17 . 9/26/2016
I love his thinking process, it amuses me so much! Needless to say... I need more of this, asap. I love your writing! You're amazing!
| RG chapter 17 . 4/6/2016
Love the story! Can't wait for the rest!...No really, I can't wait. If you take to long I may forget that you exist. I read so much that you might blur together with other stories. Which should not happen, because your just too good. So again, Love the story & WRITE MORE! PLEASE! and thank you.
| shanrui chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Hi! I am Katherine2000 ! I jut wanted to say this work of yours was a delight to read! I would be immensly grateful if you continue because you have knack for writing. Wish you the best!
| viha chapter 10 . 12/13/2015
Your story is delight to read.
But sadly it seems you have forgotten
about your us : (
| The calling chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
I can't wait to read more of this
| Vamptisha chapter 17 . 3/26/2015
I like this story...can u plz finish this story...i really wnt to wat happen next with them _
| dancingfingers chapter 17 . 10/23/2014
Too bad you haven't updated in ages.
A great story, by the way!
| wishtly chapter 17 . 7/18/2013
This is really wonderful story and I really do hope you continue to write, whether it be for this story or any others.
Your way with words, I can't really describe it - the weight of emotions carry, yet there is a lightheartedness that uplifts you? Haha. Me thinks my compliments need work.
But anyways, I'll ruin this review by begging for an update to this story, but I would really like to know where the story and your interpretations of the characters are going. I'll keep my fingers crossed for an update :)
But beyond that, I hope your block has disappeared for other things, because your writing is wonderful and should be shared and appreciated!
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/7/2013
You are a wonderful writer and I sincerely hope you find time for it again.
| Youko's Befuddled Fox chapter 17 . 4/9/2013
This very good I hope you don't give up.
| Mordacious Moratorium chapter 17 . 1/16/2013
Silver. I can count the number of reviews I've written and one hand And I am glad to say you'll make use another hand now.