Aww Im glad they finally talked and the apologies werent one sided

I never realized how Eiji and Kawarama definitely have something going on here when I last read this fic when I was like 13 lol good for them

Well damn, kinda feel guilty that I'm not as sad about Sen's death as I usually am when it comes to these type of scenes. He just had his moments where he was a bit annoying so I never grew attached to his character (I'm immune to the bratty, sunshine characters). Its sad to see the impact of his death though.

I get mourning and all that but it still pisses me off so much when a character gets accused for not reacting to someones death, especially when that person grew up with them so of course they would have cared... I love Eiji but HE BETTER APOLOGIZE AND NOT HAVE YUI BE THE ONE TO FIX THEIR RELATIONSHIP, CUS I HATE WHEN CHARACTERS JUST WALK ALL OVER THE MC JUST CUS THEY MISUNDERSTOOD A SITTUATION AND SO THE MC PROCEEDS TO BECOME ALL GUILTY LEADING TO THEM SAYING SORRY WHEN THEY ARENT IN THE WRONG. I mean both feelings are valid but why is it always the mc apologizing, too kind for their own good

Rereading this fic and I now want Yui to end up with Hashirama ngl, they have chemistry

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Such an amazing story, I wish there would be a next chapter , but a year passed already and there is no chapter :(

I really like it !

Hashirama reminds me of Gandalf in this chapter as he uses his “magic” to make kids happy. I love this angle of his power, he’s really interesting although I’m more of an Uchiha girl lol
And I gotta say, there’s been no romance here so far, but I’m devouring this story. It’s so good, it’s eloquent but easy to read and visualise. You’re an awesome writer!

As much as I enjoy the writing style and the dialogues, I am most impressed with your knowledge of medicine and herbs. It makes the story so much better and deeper but doesn’t overwhelm the reader.
Still love the OC. And her interactions with Hashirama and Madara are very interesting.
It’s been a while since I found a fanfic I can’t let go of, but I can’t stop reading

I’m on the first chapter. Just wanted to say how much I like it before moving on. The OC is so normal and calm, yet so personable. I really like her. The dialogues, reasons behind actions and the occasional knowledge about medicine and herbs is great :)

this is an amazing story! thanks so much for writing and sharing. its so different from the rest of the fandoms fic, it makes for a refreshing and engaging read

Idek how many times I've read this & still been engrossed fully

Super excited for the next chapter! I love the story!

Buen fic.
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Good fic.