Reviews for Helpless
Brendalwood chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
I thought this was great.
Michi-Gibbs chapter 1 . 1/18/2019
Really beautiful :)
Nonnie88 chapter 2 . 1/10/2019
Absolutely nothing wrong with it!
Doesn’t feel scattered. It was intimate, on a different level to what I’ve been reading of yours!
Just perfect!
just drifting chapter 1 . 4/24/2018
this was lovely. just quiet and familiar intimacy. the lack of a clear structure really added to it; it felt like you'd just taken a little snapshot of their day.
ditzie-blonde chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
This story seems so natural and like something that could actually happen between a couple. I really enjoyed it.
Spamez chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
I like that you brought some humor and reminiscing into this
FragmentedSandwiches chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
This is so sweet! I love it.
Prettylittlepetal chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
I love this story! It's so believable, but so bloody cute
LittleCatt chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
Loved this, it was so sweet and so true to their relationship!
Ngeniesse chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
I really enjoyed this story.
lil'mousie323 chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
Wonderful story! I sure hope Ali's worry makes him think long and hard about getting that desk job!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
I really really really loved this. It was incredible.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
This was cute! Elizabeth taking care of him was sweet and I loved the moment with Ali!
teammccord chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
Loved this :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
I believe this was my prompt so it's only fair I review! Loved it just what I imagined. Thanks!
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