Reviews for Dark Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a great read! The characters were awesome, the world was super cool, and the emotions really landed. I didn’t want it to end.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. I'm pretty sure Toga is the surname, not the name. Is it different in this fic, is it just an error, or does he actually prefer to use her first name? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eww, an OC made for the express purpose of causing angst and drama. Is this OC your self insert? A creepy villain dude doing creepy villain things. |
![]() ![]() This isn't your average everyday darkness. This is... Advanced Darkness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I love your story and I thought you would line this video. /bjCoyRe4qHo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, let's hope he does get to live a long enough life... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this is one amazing Quirk he have my friend! |
![]() ![]() Yeah this story is so slow to the point it's trash |
![]() ![]() Look I hear this is good but it's so fucking slow like what's his quirk damn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() TSSSS yeah darkness is BAMF for him right now. But I can see light being absolutely destructive as hell and powerful applied properly anyways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You realize she's the same age as Izuku? He was 16 when she was introduced at 16. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His quirk remind me of the super power of captain starlight from the super powered's series by Drew Hayes. Except we didn't see much of captain starlight himself. However his two grandchildren individually had light and darkness. |
![]() ![]() So about the previous post theme in sunshine superman has same concept of power as they absorb solar energy and manuplates it only differences that he cannot control darkness and is pretty OP |
![]() ![]() So have to say I found this fic at the perfect time as just finished Mr sunshine superman fanfiction and the mc had same powers as izuku has and so far I am loving it so props to you Thanks for the fic I will continue to ready Z city neighbors and wait for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story sucks ass because you made his fucking quirk way to goddamn complicated and confusing. Its not fucking hard he absorbs sunlight and can fire it like ki blasts. Add some simple side abilities to it and bam write a story. My god I have seen somebody take a simple power and over fucking complicate it like you have. Do us a favor and stay on patreon and take this garbage with you. |