Great story

"...beat the youth back into your body." Is the funniest shit I've heard Gai say! HAHAHA, keep up the good work!

A really good story mate
hope you continue it!

man, I hate it when good fanfics like these are drooped.

Wtf, it sounds like a pair of gays about to proposing each other lmao

too much useless drama

Nothing was more haunting than the phrase, “it is better than the alternative”

I wish someone else would have adopted and continued this fic, if the author isn't interested in it anymore. this is great and way different than the tipical fics we read.

Brilliant, to quote your story. This piece is an excellent and griping read and it is a great shame that hasn't continued. I really wish it would, but if not, I believe you can be proud of what's written. Thank you, I really enjoyed it.

shit story. Making Naruto annoying like that. no wonder people hate him in that case

Damn I wanted to see more Iruka

We really need more stories where Iruka becomes Great Teacher Oniruka

Ah, I see.
"I can do this" implies that your motivation stems from your own self confidence that you have the ability to do something.
"I have to do this" implies that your motivation stems from external sources that forces you to learn to do something.

For real tho, back in school, half of my class are geniuses in some way. A few were masters in cooking, some have really excellent grades, two of them had businesses at a young age. The dead last was an absolute monster in manipulating people. One thing in common is most of us (except the grade people of course) have average grades.

School really takes the joy out of learning.

Nooooo!
please!
I'M BEGGING YOU! I NEED MOOOOREEEE