So this is the second story I've read of yours and it's another amazing plot. Well written with enjoyable characters. Keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed your story. especially the outtakes. you were correct about not being overly detailed when you wrote this but I really wish for more outtakes to cover other things. thank you for the story.

your comment about Greys Anatomy, is ironic because I generally only comment at the end of most stories I read because I don't read WIP's, I'm to impatient. Anyways I was going to say this was like a Greys/Twilight twist after just the Dr Jasper thing cause it reminded me of Mark Sloane.. so far I like this story even the dark and twisty parts..

I completely agree with the note before the chapter starts! respect is earned!

The way health care is treated in America is wicked. Backwards and cruel.

People always laugh at me when I say my hair tries to kill me during the night. I have to keep it up in a bun or it seriously would strangle me.

I've just finished binge reading your wonderful story. Once I started I just couldn't stop until I devoured every word. The story sucked me in and I don't think I have the right words to express how much I have enjoyed it. I even read your ANs which I never do and you had me crying as you shared YOUR story. Big hugs to you and thank you for sharing everything with us :)

I really loved your story and I so admire you for your bravery in sharing your personal experience with HLHS. Andrew and Emily were blessed to have a mother who loved them so much.

Now I understand why they chose Emily for a name. Thanks again for sharing your story s creativity it mostly your heart in this matter. *hands in supplication * Be well.

So the three clogged arteries made him and douchenozzle and now he’s unclogged? Bella is better than I am. :-)

So did Rosalie witness that proposal? ;-)

I thought Charles was gone. So sad. So his version of trying is claiming a granddaughter he wanted aborted and calling his daughter a whore for having a date. Wow, he’s a gem really. Again story so perfect without him. What’s Alice up to does she have a man yet? So I guess we won’t meet Carlisle or Edward’s sisters? I love Esme though. Well done.

You hate doing lemons but you rock the foreplay and that is everything hon. ;-)

Again that bathroom banter was fun. Edward still has the asshole edge but much cuter in his new skin for sure.

In a way Bella is an outlet for holding back so much for 25 years. It’s not just her and Charlotte. Now he needs to see the rest of his family.