|Reviews for Rachel McCloud|
| Adv.ced chapter 6 . 9/12
Whats with the guest with the Mabel hate boner?you keep saying the same stuff man...
| ROCuevas chapter 7 . 9/13
Quite well done
| Angelwings2002 chapter 7 . 9/13
Wow, really good so far! Can't wait to find out what's next!
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/4/2017
mabel really needs to learn to mind her own business and dipper needs to stop forgiving her so easily.
| ROCuevas chapter 6 . 12/4/2017
Quite well done this was. Really good work.
| catspats31 chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
Just a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken, despite your okay writing quality in terms of spelling and grammar:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Please use dialogue similar to: "It's nothing," Dipper said. Add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavor.
| ROCuevas chapter 5 . 10/4/2017
Quite well done.
| ROCuevas chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
Quite well done this was.
| ROCuevas chapter 3 . 6/21/2017
Quite well done.
| JeiIsSpookeredByRoombas chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
rule 1 for OC making: Don't make your character romantically evolved with the main character unless you have a good reason. so if it makes you feel bad, I made this mistake a lot though, all writers do it.
| ROCuevas chapter 2 . 4/11/2017
So far still a good start.
| ROCuevas chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
Quite interesting chapter this was.