Sinceramente hablando... siempre me a gustado que en los fics donde aparece broly, o por lo menos el broly de Toey, goku y Broly se hagan amigos... o el protagonista y broly se hagan amigos...

Pero tampoco me molestaría que utilizarán canon broly, porque ya sabes, con el ya tenemos un límite de que tan fuerte es en Super Saiyajin legendario o su equivalente a ssj1

hopefully chichi still stays a fighter in z

dont you think its to much of a coincident that sayens speak english I mean they should also have there own lanuage , sorry for my speling english is not my first language

Doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon't kill GINE

Don't kill Gine

Dude, I love the tings you make

Saiyan slice of life. Who knew such a thing would be great to see?

You know. Wondering how Goku would grow up while with his family has always been a wonder. I look forward to seeing how this goes!

OK your story started good but really feels like you went full overpowered with the story with goku turning ssj when he's a kid. I could understand gohan how he was trained by adult goku and others. Gotenks and kid trunks never made sense turning ssj. Kinda feel with bardock training he would be strong but not to that level anyways I'm out.

oh wait... the humans will become their enemy? I sort of saw that coming but I wasn't expecting to see Roshi included. that's a twist.

Im on chapter 15 so far and I really really REALLY hope our good old lovable goku is still the same person.

Jingle village and Eighter are crucial to Goku's character and his motivations throughout the series. I can see that you're trying to take his character down a new path, and I mean no offense, but you're not a good enough writer to pull it off. I've read the entire story and came back to this chapter specifically to comment that your Goku feels fragmented, like a side piece rather than actual character. His personality changes depending on what you need in the latter chapters, and there's 0 consistency.

I really hope the next wish, from the Dragon Balls, will bring everyone, with Saiyan blood, together.

...so bora stayed dead...
is up going to be the Crane school nightmare?

An epic read. Thanks for this treat.