God I'm so emotional when I'm sleep deprived. I've been Crying about goku not having brain damage for 5 minutes now.

i like how radiz went into kakorots mind and soothed his fear being that he turned ape and killed his grandpa. this is turning out to be a wonderful fanfict

it would have bean cool to read more training in this chapter instead of just barley touching on it and you are rely quit good at writing stories. in order to defeat friza one or all of them will have to access super saiyan and that requires the pain of loss unfortunately unless their is another way to get their that i am not familiar with.

i wonder how different kakorot will be with the scar tissue removed. i love this story

i think it was a smart decision for to get the surgery he will need that instinct to aid him in battle and give him better i were in his place and was a warrior wanting to help people i would probablly decide the same especially if it is freza i would be helping my family go up against he is no joke.

wow i wonder what their father and raditz are trying to accomplish with this move. i wonder how they expect goku/kakorot to they think that his blood lust will surface during battle to protect people.

wow i was looking forward too seeing what goku/kakorot would be like after the surgery. w wonder what thos instructions are how are thay going to get goku to unleash his saiyan instincts and be able to control them.

i love your story so far and i am rely interested to what the changes to goku will be to come.

wow that was very cruel and it rely does remind me of freza. i hope at some point he learns not to disable his opponents chance to ever do anything again.

it is very interesting the thought that both halves knows exactly what the outer is thinking and they want the same course it does make sense being that they are the same person. it is clear to me that bardock loves goku and wants the best for him.

i wonder how if at all his persnality will change after the operation i love this fanfict.

very exiting i wonder wene they will bring up the topic of training also i hope that the doctors can help goku regain some of his lost memories. however will that change his personality as well.

wow raditz cares for goku and is willing to answer his questions that his father would otherwise not tolerate. what a very interesting story cant wait too see were this goes.

this seems like a type of fanfict that i have wanted for a while but have never seen a interesting one before.i cant wait too see were this goes keep up the good work.

I don't know, it feels like you made the Saiyans too feral. For the most part, Saiyans aren't much different personality wise. They've never in any Dragon Ball content used weird words like cub, mate and all. And neither incarnation of Bardock, whether the Z version or DB minus version acted like this.

What you've portrayed would maybe fit the Saiyans if they were still living in caves or something.