Reviews for Goddess of War
Mats Forsen chapter 6 . 1/8
Very nice! Too bad it seems abandoned but it was a very pleasant read. I have to agree with Tela though, she should have been able to get out from under Arias thumb with her abilities. Maybe she didn't want to disturb Canon too much?
poison chihuahua chapter 1 . 11/7/2022
why is the first thing on its mind saving the aliens and some player defined character that is also a synthetic made by the same organisation that tortured her and accidentally or maybe truly created her because the AI and simulations are a thing in that universe so again why is she running to danger and risk herself for meaningless organics that may or may not even treat her like a living subject and if they do would consider her a threat to be eliminated and contained because she has the capability to evolve endlessly both physically and mentally and by all things logical or emotional that is what a lone individual should do be they a AI or a random si they should leave the races alone and build themselves up in isolation because no matter what happens contact with them will always lead conflict
Spartanhybrid1.5 chapter 6 . 2/22/2022
A good and rare read where the si isn’t gallivanting off to shepherd right off the bat and instead integrates themselves into the background as a potential merc in Shephard’s band of misfits who gradually became a second family in mass effect 2 ( mass effect 3 doesn’t count too me because it always felt like the original crew drifted away and where more busy in there own lives ) and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes from here gonna add to my fav/follows
GiantPsychoGecko chapter 6 . 4/8/2021
This is a brilliant fic, and a really cool concept. I would love to see more of both this and son of the dragon as both are among some of my favorite fics to date.
stephnyn chapter 6 . 3/17/2021
I'm not sure what happened to you, but I hope someday you'll come back to this. One of my top 5 favorite OCs in a fic.
Starpottergeek chapter 6 . 12/25/2020
please oh please continue i want to see what happens next. so basicly athena looks like a mix between nova terra from starcraft, widowmaker from overwatch, and a hunter from destiny
B317 chapter 6 . 4/7/2020
Griezz chapter 6 . 2/23/2020
Fascinating story! Usual issues of gamer SI-ish OCs being unable to help using geek references, no matter how OOC... but not bad in this context. Loved the bit where Neith idly thinks that she should charge rent in her head, only to have her mental Threads immediately start developing a full barter system for attention time. Priceless!
Please keep the chapters coming!
FelixtheSax chapter 6 . 11/9/2019
Really, I love just about any story even similar to this, with a super hacker or whatever in ME, but your writing is superb, your characters are great, and I love the plot so far. Tela has often been one of my favorite fandom characters, and making/keeping her a good guy always gets points from me. Majors props to you :)
Badpressure chapter 6 . 11/6/2019
Would love to read more of this. Still writing it?
Guest chapter 6 . 11/1/2019
Almost a year now, over 100 reviews. You’re a good writer, and this story has potential. People want you to continue if you’re still keen.
Terry Pyke chapter 6 . 10/1/2019
Please please continue!
LexiCon1996 chapter 6 . 9/17/2019
Amazing story. I love the characters,their development and their challenges. Fantastic, I hope to see many more chapters!
adelphe24 chapter 6 . 6/7/2019
This is SO much better than i could ever hope for!
I love it! Shes not OP- but still badass and powerful and she had to work for it. And i love her personality as well as the way she portrays herself to people she doesnt trust. Cant wait to see what happens!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/6/2019
Please continue
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