Reviews for Goddess of War |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love Neith. She’s complex but seems ultimately balanced |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should definitely continue this story. |
![]() ![]() One of the most brilliantly written pieces I have read. Interesting, realistic and fun to read. I love it! I would love to read more! |
![]() ![]() Please continue it, I am enjoying it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this. Fantastic job, I really like your idea and the way you've executed it. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() from what I understand OP is exactly what mass effect universe need from total extinction, Reapers OP super Bio organic computer machine you know what I mean, Plus even if Commander Shepard save them, how about the enormous amount of casualties even if they win, It would be a Pyrrhic victory. To me not having an OP Self Insert is pretty much useless, what are you gonna do?, follow Shepard in his crew doing pretty much the same stuff you do in game?, In fact a self insert should be doing much more like actually creating something, to properly fight the Reaper and there Agent head on reducing casualties in the war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story so far! Keep updating cause I'll be waiting for the next one! |
![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this fic and would love to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work, update soon please. 4/5 |
![]() ![]() Lol weaboo failed athena rll for being a dumb bitch in frnt of aria and had to give up the wisdom schtick. Guss we get to see the cunt fail at war next lol |
![]() ![]() ...somfucking weaboo |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooo this was a good chapter... things are spicing up. I hope you continue. I really enjoyed seeing how tela reacted to Athena. this new mission sounds cool, but I also want to see what she does with her freedom after. good luck writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story, hope it continues |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the Assassin's Creed input |
![]() ![]() Just read through all 6 chapters and this story is so amazing! Please please please! Keep it going |