|Reviews for A Quest for the Falling Star|
| dakotamarshall02061995 chapter 52 . 5/26/2019
Possibly one of the best romance fanfics ive ever read i know im getting to this late but i loved every page this author is most likely gonna be my favorite author for this genre of romance and drama i just finished today been reading a page a day before bed to give me good dreams and in all honesty if they are this good with all their work i will be reading all i can find. Hands down my new canon!
| TheSnowflake18 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
OMG, I spent eterneties trying to find this fanfic again! I'm so happy and I love it!
| Amogh24 chapter 52 . 4/7/2018
Absolutely loved this story. It was great, especially the first parts of it.
| LeviLemon chapter 51 . 2/9/2018
This has honestly been one of my favourite stories to read of all time, let alone fan fiction. I loved the way you captured the characters and made it your own. I feel fulfilled at the end while still wanting more :) like the ending of Futurama where the whole thing restarts itself like the story is complete but begins anew from here. I found watching the character develop to be awesome.
Marco to struggle and fight to become a hero in his own right
Star to overcome feelings of darkness and see the light in everything
Tom to find love again and become his own man
Jackie to deal with her heartbreak, find new love and deepen their friendships
Steven - aid monsterkind and help forge a new tomorrow
John to stand by the heros and support them as if he was born to
Janna... basically stayed as Janna
Pete - still curious what he was promised
Toffee - a douche but stayed true to his goals to the end which in a twisted way i can respect
It has been an amazing story to read and I'm glad i chose to re-read from start to finish :) hope the Quest for Lost Lights is anywhere near as awesome as the Quest For The Falling Star has been :)
| LeviLemon chapter 50 . 2/9/2018
Beautiful :) is all i can think to say about this chapter :) simply awesome
| LeviLemon chapter 48 . 2/9/2018
Ahh gotta love a Sonic reference :) Marco seems like he's more prepared for royalty than both Star and Tom haha :) I think he'll do fine. Lovely Starco moments throughout this whole biss :) Wondering if Jackie's trip to the underworld was enlightening to the pair. How will she react to meeting Tom's parents haha XD if you have them as the same as his parents from the show i think all of the characters will be shocked haha :) and awesome description on their clothes at the end :) I feel like i can really see how they look :)
| LeviLemon chapter 47 . 2/9/2018
Aww adorable :) and Ludo VS the crane machine is definitely one of my favourite moments in this haha XD its somewhat.. disheartening to see someone who was able to get beaten up everyday and get back up and try again to be so... fatigued and broken. I see why Dennis is so worried given Ludo's personality and tenaciousness turn into sombreness and solitude must be horrible. Though i do worry about his "Mastering of the wild" haha hopefully he'll find Spider and Eagle :)
| LeviLemon chapter 46 . 2/9/2018
I'm glad you incorporated that moment with Moon as sometimes i really don't know where she stands with Marco but it seems like she feels she can reason with him much more than Star. Nice to see them return to Echo Creek and it's a testament to the last year that a group of monsters turn up at their home and they just get some more chairs haha XD brilliant loving this story.
| LeviLemon chapter 45 . 2/9/2018
Quite a dark chapter like seeing all the characters vent their hate knowing they can't quite let it go wild. Toffee seems to not have gained anything in terms of perspective but knowing his plan is kind of odd.. he killed star to become marco to be with Star? Did he have another way to revive her or did he mean a different butterfly. How long has he had his eye on Marco and is the body they met when they destroyed the wand the first Toffee or have others been sacrificed for his immortality hmmm questions...
| LeviLemon chapter 44 . 2/9/2018
Hahaha River is honestly amazing :) just when you think he couldn't get better he's like this. Love the way you show him and think that this story is a great path for the story. I liked the shows war arc but i found parts of it lacking and felt like they could have done more in some points but feel like you fill the gaps nicely :) star has her chapter in the book. Marco really is accepted properly by River and Moon and much more. Awesome work dude :)
| LeviLemon chapter 43 . 2/9/2018
Once again a lovely chapter its nice to see that Marco is still leading the fight for equality and his friendship level with Tom is out of this world haha :) got my answer to the Eclipsa question :) wonderful writing
| LeviLemon chapter 42 . 2/9/2018
Yeah H-Poo is okay XD that's great such a lovely chapter with bright new beginnings :) I am still curious with what's going to happen to eclipsa and what will happen to those that sided toffee in the war? Wonder how the proposal will go down as well with the royals haha :)
| LeviLemon chapter 41 . 2/9/2018
Awww that was an awesome battle arc XD love the guardian angel watching over the battle, the hero prince leading the battle staying true to his morals and everything he gained from these adventures :3 While monster rights is still in question it has been great to see them fight side by side! Love the Spanish and the idea about Star being a literal magical girl and Japanese :3 got a big love of anime and manga and the thought of it was great like Stars royal lineage could follow that since their are many stories in Japanese law of monsters and demons haha anyway awesome story still and will defo keep reading the rest :)
| LeviLemon chapter 40 . 2/9/2018
Can't stop must keep reading ahhhhhhh soooo goooooood!
| LeviLemon chapter 39 . 2/9/2018
Ahhhhh such a good chapter and fight XD bout time everyone stopped underestimating Marco. Can't write much need to keep reading