Two girls fighting over you? Well sure, if they didn't have such bloodlust looks on their faces. Looking forward to the next chapter (and when they discover the history of Moon and Toffee).

I love this chapter the most, focusing on the inner feelings and relationship of star and marco, your an amazing storyteller, keep up with the amazing work!

(Bloodhound Sniff) What's this? (Sniff) Starco things happening? (Sniff) Marco liking it? (Sniff)...I smell a Jackie POV coming. XD

Ohh, this is getting good! I can't wait to see the how this is going to go! :D
Quick question though, you say that Eclipsa was killed by her own people. But what about in the episode "Crystal Clear" inside Rhombulus's lair Eclipsa can be found crystallized in the background? Is this a AU where that never happened and she did die? Or are you planning something..? ;3

Wow, I don't have access to my PC for 2 days and you already made 5 new chapters.

There's been a lot of people doing the theme of Marco following Star (for obvious reasons), but I think yours may be my favorite so far! I hope to see more soon! :D

damm, great story man. Can't wait for the historical points of the butterfly family and Mewni itself. Keep up the good work.

update soon

This is...intriguing. The concept is quite similar to Starfall, with a little dive into the historical conflict on Mewni. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

im likeing where this is going and this will hold me off till the new season comes out not that i would stop reading there but you get the point