Reviews for A Quest for the Falling Star
LeviLemon chapter 38 . 2/9/2018
Ooo can't wait for the battle but loving the references and their team now has like representatives from so many types earth, mewni, the demons, the public, monsters of all types woo for equality haha
LeviLemon chapter 37 . 2/9/2018
Really feeling for Ludo here haha and Marco's starting to remind me of Samurai Jack in that the legend of him alone inspires hope and stories of him are spread around to overcome the oppression and unjust world. It was sweet to see star defending Ludo and Tom sulking haha :)
LeviLemon chapter 36 . 2/9/2018
Interesting chapter, does Marco have a hidden split personality that only Janna knows? Or is it monster arm? Or just Marcos hidden anger? It seems like every villain has a hidden agenda and that all the adults are keeping secrets hmm very peculiar haha gotta keep reading
LeviLemon chapter 35 . 2/9/2018
This chapter was lovely :) everyone reuniting and reaffirming their bonds its like they are all more aware of each other. Still worried Pete's playing them and is gonna be bad but hey ho lol It's nice that the girls sorted their beef out and poor Marco never realising he was quite the ladies man haha honestly Janco is my fav ship of the show as I feel its the most natural pair haha and forgot to say Jeff is an awesome name for a tree haha just imagining a tree saying "my name is Jeff" got me cracking up
LeviLemon chapter 34 . 2/9/2018
I think having the treaty adds so much to this story and its interesting to see abut the demon treaty like there is a clear bias going on in mewni with things like blood and appearance being a major part with suppression of the decides "lesser classes" reminds me of learning about WW2 and all its atrocities and really adds the feeling of war on a grand scale so its an awesome touch to the story! Loving it!
LeviLemon chapter 33 . 2/9/2018
Dang that was a conflicted chapter :) I'm glad to see Pete again but was worried when he was against the group I'm glad he's still on their side and not dead.. Can skeletons die o.O I'm glad hellboy and koori are understanding their emotions haha Is koori a reference to something or something you invented? I feel a bit sorry for Steven haha he has had to witness so much crazy after tagging along and I hope he pulls through haha
LeviLemon chapter 32 . 2/9/2018
Another great chapter :) the split in the group is becoming more obvious now though. Marco and Tom seem to be holding things together for now trying to balance their girls as well as their own emotions. I really like this portrayal of Tom as while he is still like himself he seems more mature like the trials really existed for him and he and Marco have an unspoken bond with that :)
LeviLemon chapter 31 . 2/9/2018
Been a long time, so much so that I had to re-read the whole fic :) which was really nice to be honest haha its clear there is still so much tension within the group but they're carrying on regardless. I feel like while they are giving Marco the recognition for what he's done they need to realise like tom pointed out mentally he is a 30yr old dude that survived alone for years and that he is sort of compromising with them but lovely chapter :) glad to be reading again
Enternal Flame chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Hey so you know when your going to post though sequels beacuse I have been waiting. (Not to rush)
Guest chapter 53 . 9/30/2017
Jesus christ! Its about time. Im super pumped for this story
Miguel chapter 52 . 9/3/2017
Just so you know, that last comment regarding chapter 9 was from me.
Guest chapter 52 . 9/2/2017
Dear writer, im wondering why youve chosen not to modify anything from chapter 9 in your story line and also why did you feel neccesary to include certain parts in it, that happened differently in the series? for example: during the bloodmoon dance you chose to make so that star is hipnotized under the light of the bloodmoon instead of just being lovestruck by marco like she was in the canon just curious.
ValkyrieKnight96 chapter 3 . 8/28/2017
I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read the next one on my next break later.
ValkyrieKnight96 chapter 2 . 8/28/2017
Aww, this was such a fluffy chapter. X3 I'm so glad this is completed. I don't have to wait for it to update, hahaha!
ValkyrieKnight96 chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
I'm definitely going to read more.
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