Reviews for A Quest for the Falling Star
thewookie1 chapter 49 . 7/31/2017
Sounds good
jolleIQ chapter 48 . 7/31/2017
Surprisingly, I was hoping for the moment to be ruined at the end and Jackie walking off while laughing like an evil demon xD... I like her, btw.
Deathclaw2010 chapter 8 . 7/24/2017
How does Janna know what kind of monster Toffee is?
Deathclaw2010 chapter 3 . 7/23/2017
You're using "damn" and "shit" in a K story.

The exchange between Jackie and Janna is too formal for the most part.

Be sure to use commas for structures like "was nothing special girl" to "was nothing special, girl".
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 48 . 7/21/2017
Star & Marco in charge of a ball? Let the madness run wild!

P.S. How appropriate this & the next chapter is about ball, considering at SDCC today, they aired a teaser clip of Star & Tom ballroom dancing.
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 47 . 7/20/2017
Awww what a sweet moment after some fun at the arcade.
thewookie1 chapter 47 . 7/20/2017
Obviously the first thing I think of in terms of romance is arcade zombie shooters :)
Enternal Flame chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
My sister just ran into my room beacuse I squeled and she wanted to make sure j wasn't having a asume attack beacuse of the ending. Just saying
thewookie1 chapter 46 . 7/20/2017
This is definitely a strangely fascinating story, there are odd plot devices but that is partially since I started reading after the Movie. Impressive however how you've persevered all this time.
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 46 . 7/18/2017
Finally! Now that I finished watching The Battle For Mewni (which was glorious, shame it ended on cliffhanger) & I finally could read this & review this!

I'll keep this short cuz I just finished T.B.F.M. & super late at night. Marco's parents reaction to him returning home was on point as Latino parents (not racist, I'm Latino), although I was expecting Mrs. Diaz to be the one giving Marco the "Meeting with Jesus" talk (and that's the correct phase, not "Talk with Jesus"),but regardless the emotional moment was there.

Anyways man, good job. Don't respond back (and I do mean DON'T respond). I'm going to bed. Night.
Enternal Flame chapter 46 . 7/17/2017
So you knew star would die and come back to life! Wow jeez!
Bobman69 chapter 23 . 7/15/2017
wait eclipsa is moon's great great great great great great great great grandmother so moon felll in love with her great great great great great great great half brother.
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 45 . 7/14/2017
Even in defeat, the poor bas ta rd still tries to get the last word.

P.S. Don't respond cuz I know you need sleep.
That Weird Guy chapter 42 . 7/14/2017
So! Peace falls on Mewni! Marco wants ask Star's parents about the 'question' and their future together. My, this is a wonderful project you have here!
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 44 . 7/13/2017
I knew the "Meeting the Jesus" talk was gonna go down & Jesus dude, what did I say about multi chapters!? You good sir, are a damn rabbit
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