This was sweet and wonderful and I loved it :D Awesome to see an origin story for Bismuth joining the Crystal gems, not out of violence or revenge, but as a desire to grow and learn and be MORE than "just" a Bismuth. Top tier!

Short and sweet.

This chapter felt a little bit off from the other chapters, but that's probably because of the time skip. This has been a wonderful story and I look forwards to seeing many more from you all. See you soon!

TooManyFandoms

Awwe, I can't believe this is it! :(

But also :)

It's great. It was and is quite the short story masterpiece. A wonderful hindsight at Bismuth's potential development.

~Drunk

Whut, only 4 chapters?

~Drunk

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I love this story more and more. Bismuth is one of my favourite characters in Steven Universe, but I can never seem to find good stories involving her. This is a well written, Bismuth-centric, world building story and possibly one of my favourite stories of all time. Can't wait for the next chapter!

TooManyFandoms

I think I'm in love. Can't wait for the next update!

This story is very creative and I've never seen anything quite like it. Giving Bismuth a full backstory, developing Biggs, Crazy Lace and Snowflake, giving Bismuth a more defined role in Homeworld's hierarchy, the rules, even the introduction of the Crystal Gems, heck, EVERYTHING just flows so naturally and realistically. Your use of language is really interesting and I honestly haven't found something that's up to this quality of work in a long time.

I'm really getting into this now. :)

How can you guys do so much in just two chapters?

Love it. :) And, of course, we still have Cotton Candy Garnet. Lul, 'a gem only wearing one boot'

Gold. Or well, Red and Blue, but it's all the same, haha :P

~Drunk

A Bismuth story?,awesome!,and it has Bigg and Snowflake and Crazy Lace!,awww,they're going to try rescue Bismuth,now that's something!,great way to celebrate "El dia del Trabajador" in my country,reading this fic

Nice. But what is "The Rewriter" series?

~Drunk