|Reviews for Wolfblood- Jatei fanfiction|
| Fanfic.Worm223 chapter 1 . 4/22
Thank You wolf200 and cherry! And jeez thanks sis MMLV
| MMLV chapter 1 . 4/20
I know that the majority of fanfic writers write 'Character's POV' but really it is not necessary to write 'POV'. It makes you sound like an amateur. Love you sis
| Cherry chapter 2 . 4/15
Plz update. It's a great start! There sooo aren't enough jatei fanfics
| wolf200 chapter 3 . 4/16
Okay one thing which just wasn't Jana was the TIOS reference- Jana doesn't believe in flower giving so I don't know why she'd wanna read teenage romance hehehe!
Aside for that, it was perfect! I loved TJ say fluff ball and the speech was powerful!
Excellent job looking forward to more!
| wolf200 chapter 2 . 4/16
It's getting better and better! Well done!
Wolfblood has been wonderful hasn't it?!
| wolf200 chapter 1 . 4/16
It's not a bad fanfiction! It's rather awesome and has a lot of potential!
Shame no ones yet reviewed- perhaps jatei isn't for everyone (jaran ;) )
I think you've got Matei's character spot on though perhaps not Jana- she feels too modern and human? I can't imagine her saying I'm your girlfriend! That's like Rhydian saying babe ;)
I can't wait to read chapter 2! Well done it's hard to write Fanfictions so you should be proud!