Reviews for Wolfblood- Jatei fanfiction
Fanfic.Worm223 chapter 1 . 4/22/2017
Thank You wolf200 and cherry! And jeez thanks sis MMLV
MMLV chapter 1 . 4/20/2017
I know that the majority of fanfic writers write 'Character's POV' but really it is not necessary to write 'POV'. It makes you sound like an amateur. Love you sis
Cherry chapter 2 . 4/15/2017
Plz update. It's a great start! There sooo aren't enough jatei fanfics
wolf200 chapter 3 . 4/16/2017
Okay one thing which just wasn't Jana was the TIOS reference- Jana doesn't believe in flower giving so I don't know why she'd wanna read teenage romance hehehe!
Aside for that, it was perfect! I loved TJ say fluff ball and the speech was powerful!
Excellent job looking forward to more!
wolf200 chapter 2 . 4/16/2017
It's getting better and better! Well done!
Wolfblood has been wonderful hasn't it?!
wolf200 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
It's not a bad fanfiction! It's rather awesome and has a lot of potential!
Shame no ones yet reviewed- perhaps jatei isn't for everyone (jaran ;) )
I think you've got Matei's character spot on though perhaps not Jana- she feels too modern and human? I can't imagine her saying I'm your girlfriend! That's like Rhydian saying babe ;)

I can't wait to read chapter 2! Well done it's hard to write Fanfictions so you should be proud!