What a heavy and real conversation between these two. It looks like we are going to see how Kessler has been affecting Kensi and Deeks in the next episode. Great job on this!

You captured both their voices so well, I felt like I was reading a script from the show. Really impressive.

Hope you're staying safe!

Really well done, the emotions, fear and anxiety between them was perfectly written . I wish we could see a scene like this on the show.

This is so good! But I think you also broke my heart a little. You perfectly captured their need to keep the other safe at all costs. I also enjoy that you had them discuss such a tense subject so rationally, but still managed to maintain so much feeling and emotion.

And apologies if this comment is not very well articulated. I’m currently writing it at 11:30pm.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! LOVE the angst here! Perfect, spot-on, true-to-character reactions. My only concern is that all these awesome prediction stories are going to raise my expectations too much for when the actual episode airs! But if that happens, I'll just have to turn back to you for a fix-it fic! *evil grin*

Yay! Welcome back! So excited to see this story pop up in my in-box. (What a great week with you, Lindy, and another summer adventure from writeallnight.) I loved this. You captured them beautifully, for at the end of the day, no matter what else they are to each other, they'll always be partners. I loved the way Deeks jumped onto that as a way to get Kensi to share. He's pretty darn good at that. I would definitely enjoy a part 2 of this conversation, with the big "I love you" conversation. :-)

That was sincere and sweet. I liked it very much. Thank you for coming back to these stories. I needed something lovely to make me smile through the bleakness of reality.

Thanks for taking us back to that wonderful time when Deeks and Kensi just became a couple. It didn't feel rusty. I have only one complain though. It ended too soon. But I loved the idea. They always had better communication skills as partners. I enjoyed reading this Densi discussion and looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Love them! Great story.

Little mutant ninja assassins!

I like this very much.

This is so cute...so them...perfect. Thank you for posting.

Loved it - you nailed it!

Loved it. Deeks would do anything for her.

She’s sneaky.