|Reviews for Intersecting Realities|
| mickeysofine chapter 4 . 10/21
Lots of spelling mistakes and missing words.
Interesting premise, but needs work.
Where was the security at the award ceremony?
It's just plain stupid.
| OlegGunnarsson chapter 4 . 9/30
I really enjoyed this. Well done.
| Clavyus chapter 4 . 8/9
Great story. Loved the underlying story of slitheryn Harry and the romance with Fleur.
| CamTheThief chapter 4 . 12/30/2018
I can't deny though that the entire narrative was tinged with sadness. Even as I finished the final paragraph I can't get over the Daphne from Harry's original world. The brief descriptions you gave of their relationship left me heartbroken (yes, I'm a romantic.) I liked your Fleur, and I liked her with Harry, but I couldn't get over the way you painted his past with Daphne. There's a definite tragedy to their story despite how few times you draw attention to it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
The first person POV ruined it.
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2018
mourn, not morn
please get a proofreader.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
This story could use some proofreading, and some better formatting, noticed several walls of text.
Two examples of typos seen:
Occlumency, not Occulmency
room, not roam
| ak chapter 4 . 9/18/2018
| Perspicacity chapter 4 . 9/16/2018
Nice story; the Ron death was a particularly poignant moment.
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| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
I really enjoyed this chapter but its waaaayy to long. Maybe split it into 5 parts instead of just 1. I also like this slytherin Harry and want him to be reunited with his lover.
| ak chapter 4 . 5/8/2018
| Goog chapter 4 . 4/13/2018
Your stories are so underrated. I am frankly astonished that you have not got more favourites for this story. Really really liked it, well done.
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2018
Definitely an interesting concept & nicely written story...but did Sirius die or something? You sort of just wrote him out completely, which seems very strange.
| user51s2r chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
I am greatly enjoying this story. I usually don't spend time reading stories with such a low review/favorite ratio. BUT, I am really glad I accidentally read this one! The writing style is really good. I don't recall any errors/typos/word choice problems so far. The characters are consistent.