Reviews for The Invincible Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the decision that Sophia might push someone to is probably the opposite to the one she wanted. Sophia really stuck her foot in her mouth what with calling the Director Piggy within the first few seconds of conversation. That whole conversation was the opposite of smooth. Sophia should have really come up with a better plan than just “find the bamf chick and then wing it”. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this so far! It’s a great setup and I hope you continue it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK you had my attention, but now you peak my interest. Hooray for awkward crush's HAIL THE SPOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I wish you continued this. It's really goddamn good. Also, it's not canon that Pyrrha has a literal Achilles heel, but she was shot there when she died. She might want armor over that spot. |
![]() ![]() Any chance roman might appear it'd be cool to have some else from remnant show up. |
![]() ![]() Please continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() In all honesty though, Pyr could probably kill ya in twice as many ways with a popsicle stick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was I wrong...? We shall see... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ba-BAM! JAWDROPPER! Lets see where your taking this. I imagine she's gonna fight, cuz that is all she knows...yaknow...hunter training...and stuff... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't let this story die! it's very good! |
![]() ![]() I beg you please continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Had me laughing pretty good at the end there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid question from the vaguely inept here, I've seen the two worlds called earth 'bet', 'beta', 'belt' 'betd', 'alph' 'alpha', and 'aleph' across TOO MANY stories to mention. Does anyone know what the two worlds are called in canon? |
![]() ![]() Funny thing... even Jaune (part4) is more of a Hunter badass than Sophia. The Beacon kids are war veterans rather than just being bullies. |