While this seems like a good story, I just can't agree with an MC that hates the world but does nothing to change it. Yes, changing the world means having to be the strongest shinobi there is, and to get there you need to kill. Refusing to kill is putting shackles on yourself for no reason other than stubbornness. The same thing with him refusing to be Kichiro, eve though he literally took over his boby. Just stubbornness. The same goes with going against Sakumo, and frankly stupid. If Sakumo was a bad person, he'll say screw you and tell his secret to the Hokage and then he'll be in T&I, and maybe he'll be given to Danzo to deal with him. So, your MC is prideful, Stubborn, AND makes stupid decisions.

bro is being a little too free with his tongue, he needs a refresher on the meaning of power, leverage and wjat it means to have neither

I'm rereading your story again, I remember being here when you were regularly posting and this is too good to not read again. It's written so well that it is easy to go back to. If I ever see the third Hokage it's on sight

Holy shit it is this story

I swear I remember a story named spirit of the triage

Great chapters, English is my third language so I'll be summarizing. The book is amazing and if it could be improved I would choose to make the main character an adult deputy instead of giving him the leader.
Otherwise I feel sad because I have read a quarter of the book.

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So far, I like the intro chapter. It seems interesting. But the only thing i would say is that Kushina was not an orphan and was sent to Konoha before the attack. But other than that, I would say good chapter

Im proud of you. I can only infer and guess at what you had to work through as a teen and young adult to be capable of writing this story. The raw portrayal of narcissism and manipulation present, along with ptsd, depression, revenge, self loathing, and everything else is a testament to what you've been through in your life. I havent been able to find the reviews that were negative towards you but they're definitely not worth wasting thought on. Good job working through everything and healing your scars. Even if you never come back and finish posting this story, Im grateful to have been able to read it.

I will only say this: You heathen! How dare you put pineapple on pizza! I will destroy you!

Fudge, I forgot that this was the last chapter posted for now. URGHDHHXJCHFH I WANNA KNOW ABT THE WAR. Anywho, in my mind, the happy ending was when Kushina was pregnant and that’s where it ended in my heart

The ground turning into mud reminded me of the time when Kichiro did it to have fun. The first memory of the mud was when Natsuki was a lil toddler, now she’s grown up and playing with the big kids aka sparring

Oh dear, poor Kichiro has changed a lot

I WANNA CRY BUT I CANT BECAUSE IM IN THE CAR WITH PEOPLE. POOR KICHIRO, LIKE I ALWAYS SAW HIM AS MY KID I WAS WATCHING BEING RAISED BY ANOTHER (I like to unofficially adopt all characters I like)

I cried. Kichiro tried so hard to keep it from happening yet it still happened. He went through all of that for what? It’s practically amounted to nothing. Sure he gained some people in life, but he lost two of the most important ones