Reviews for Curse of Time
BoredKing chapter 1 . 4/28/2022
Balance breaker, not beaker. You've used beaker multiple times so I doubt it's a typo.

Also you might want to be more specific when you say time of Issei's death since he literally just died in the scene right before. I was confused at first thinking he resurrected right away.

Why is Janet surprised that her Queen piece is a mutant? You do know that the power of the pieces is determined by the King, right? And considering how weak Janet appears to be,, she wouldnt have any mutant pieces, especially not a mutant Queen piece.

Shouldn't you have had Janet explain about the whole becoming a devil part of Evil Pieces before turning Issei?

Also the whole scene just felt rushed and forced, why not just have him killed in the next scene when he got impaled instead and revise him then?

Issei immediately guessing that Rias I'd a devil is ridiculous. At least have him think it about it for a second.

So Issei's new gear hurts him when it powers up? That's really stupid.

I'm gonna be honest, the idea behind this story is near but you execution is horrible. Everything feels rushed, and I mean everything. You introduce an oc and immediately after have Issei become her servant. The stray encounter is just bad from start to finish. And worse of all, you removed Issei's character and replaced it with basically nothing. Why not just how an oc as an mc or have Issei get body snatched by an oc?
Kaiser Dragon chapter 6 . 9/5/2019
Can I make a suggestion? Take a look at Wikizilla and implement all the abilities of the various incarnations of King Ghidorah for the Story. But make it natural and gradually implement it.

Now here is a brief overview of the abilities that I could find on the abilities of King Ghidorah. Use what I have put up as a jumping point for Ghidorah’s growth.

King Ghidorah is able to fly up to speeds of mach 3 in the Earth's atmosphere. He exceeds this speed while flying through space. In Ghidorah, the Three-Headed Monster and Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah can encase himself within a meteorite while traveling from planet to planet. In Godzilla vs. Gigan he encases himself in a large diamond-like structure while traveling through space. In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah is able to fly even with the loss of one of his wings using a zero gravity field.

Gravity Beams

King Ghidorah's most famous ability is the golden lightning bolt-like gravity beams he spits from his three mouths. These beams are roughly equal in power to Godzilla's atomic breath, and are capable of causing large-scale explosions when fired at buildings. King Ghidorah's younger form from Rebirth of Mothra III, Cretaceous King Ghidorah, could spit fireballs from his mouths instead of gravity beams.

Hurricane Winds

King Ghidorah can produce hurricane-force winds by flapping his wings, which are capable of blowing away buildings and knocking other kaiju off their feet.

Constricting Necks

In Godzilla vs. King Ghidorah, King Ghidorah constricted his necks around Godzilla in an attempt to strangle him, causing him to foam at the mouth. King Ghidorah has also been seen using this ability in various games and comics.

Durability

King Ghidorah withstands Godzilla's atomic breath from point-blank in Invasion of Astro-Monster
King Ghidorah is usually portrayed as being extremely durable and resistant to damage, often to an extent close to Godzilla. He withstands conventional weaponry with no noticeable effect, and can even shrug off point-blank blasts from Godzilla's atomic breath. In Godzilla vs. King Ghidorah, he survives having his middle head decapitated and his wings shredded, and remains alive but comatose for over 200 years laying on the sea floor. In Rebirth of Mothra III his mature form cannot be damaged at all by Mothra Leo's attacks until the latter transforms into Armor Mothra. In Godzilla, Mothra and King Ghidorah: Giant Monsters All-Out Attack, King Ghidorah's durability is reduced, but he still survives being knocked out by Godzilla multiple times and withstands multiple blasts from his atomic breath.

King Ghidorah tends to use his durability to his advantage, as he often prefers to escape from a battle that he can't win before he suffers more injuries than necessary.

Fireballs

Cretaceous King Ghidorah spitting fireballs in Rebirth of Mothra III

In Rebirth of Mothra III, Cretaceous King Ghidorah can spit fireballs from his mouths in place of his usual gravity beams.

Regeneration

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah is shown to have regenerated his entire body from a severed tail that was cut off by Rainbow Mothra in the past. It is suggested in an informational book about the film that King Ghidorah could still regenerate from the wing that is cut off by Armor Mothra in their final battle.

Barrier

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah's scales can manipulate the light from projectiles to form a protective barrier.

Electric Bolts

King Ghidorah fires electric bolts from his wings in Rebirth of Mothra III

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah can shoot six bolts of electricity from each of his wings.

Dome

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah is able to create a dome that allows objects to pass through, yet has a corrosive effect when they try to leave. The dome's exterior is laced with tentacles that pull outside victims inside. Living creatures inside the dome slowly have their life-force drained and transferred to King Ghidorah.

Teleportation

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah can teleport smaller beings inside his dome.

Mind Control

In Rebirth of Mothra III, King Ghidorah can install a weak mind control on other beings susceptible to it.

Electric Bite

In Godzilla, Mothra and King Ghidorah: Giant Monsters All-Out Attack, Ghidorah can release a strong electric shock through his bite. After absorbing Mothra's power and becoming King Ghidorah, this ability is replaced by his traditional gravity beams.

Energy Shield

In Godzilla, Mothra and King Ghidorah: Giant Monsters All-Out Attack, after absorbing Mothra's energy, King Ghidorah can form a golden round energy shield that deflects Godzilla's atomic breath. King Ghidorah can release this energy shield and send it colliding with the ground, which will cause a massive explosion.

Magnetic Powers

In Ghidorah, the Three-Headed Monster, while encased in the meteorite, King Ghidorah had the ability to generate what appeared to be magnetic fields that varied in strength from time to time. While it was never stated directly what purpose they served, it was stated that they were somehow connected to its powers. It seems possible that King Ghidorah used them as a form of levitation. In the Game Boy Advance video game Godzilla: Domination!, the space monster King Ghidorah has two new, never-before-seen fighting abilities: first, the ability to emit devastating magnetic beams from his mouth, and second, the ability to produce a powerful magnetic pull around him which will draw nearby monsters closer and injure them. King Ghidorah is able to maintain the presence of his magnetic pull for roughly ten seconds before halting the attack and needing to recharge in order to reuse the attack.

Absorption

King Ghidorah absorbs solar heat and cosmic rays with its golden wings and converts them into energy.
chris kidder chapter 6 . 8/22/2019
keep up the great work i wonder when issei will meet ghidorah and will issei become a new king ghidorah.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/16/2019
Serafal has no chance here. Ghidorah is king!
Unknowingly Mad chapter 5 . 8/16/2019
How evil is Ghidorah? He had an agent of his slay God, kick started World War 1 and World War 2, and aided the Axis Powers.

If people thinks he is a good after is then they are on drugs.
Ikki chapter 5 . 8/16/2019
Ghidorah influenced Kokabeil to bring about the death of God and also started WW1 and WW2? Yep he is pure evil!
Gorosaurus Fan chapter 5 . 8/16/2019
So Ghidorah as a spirit, kicked off World War 1 and influenced the Nazis and the rise of dictators in World War 2. As if he was not evil enough!
Gorosaurus Fan chapter 2 . 8/16/2019
You have done some decent editing and King Ghidorah is truly an Eldritch Abomination and possibly the strongest being in the DxD universe and Ghidorah has seen the beginning of the DxD Universe, the origins of the Titans of Greek Myth, fought some of the strongest of them all. Typhon, Yamato-No Orochi, We also see everything that makes Ghidorah, Ghidorah. He is proud, vicious, petty and arrogant who wants everyone to know it and loves the thrill of the hunt and but hates competition.

This is King Ghidorah!
God-King Ghidora chapter 2 . 8/16/2019
Ddraig, what did you do!? You just made things worse!
Loki's Tongue chapter 2 . 8/16/2019
Holy cow! Ghidorah is even more terrifying now than ever! But how did he get locked into a Sacred Gear? I thought only Azazel was capable of making artificial ones and God creating normal ones?
Thunder Dragon chapter 2 . 8/16/2019
Oh crap! Ghidorah is even more terrifying! This is exactly what I wanted!
Kaiser Dragon chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
I just went over the fifth and sixth chapter here and some elements of your rewrite of chapter four and I am scared. Whew boy! Ghidorah does not mess around and has left quite the stamp on the world!
Loki's Tongue chapter 2 . 8/14/2019
Talk about being their and changing history! Yikes!
Gorosaurus Fan chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
Anybody else what the good guys to run?
Loki's Tongue chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
So who is going to die? Ghidorah is going to kill someone and soon i just know it!
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