Reviews for King of the World
Guest chapter 4 . 3/10
Why would you have it that Harry asks himself when when Hermione became a girl? When in the first chapter it says that Harry's had a secret crush on her since first year?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/10
Oh sorry I just realized that you could've had it that they vanished the bones ... Not just broke them...
Guest chapter 2 . 3/10
Not a bad story so far ... But why would you use skele-gro ( or however that's spelled... ) for a broken arm when it's for missing bones? Seems a lot of people forget that...
bloodline 69 chapter 1 . 2/6
update this amazing book continue the story man I appreciate it
Blake2020 chapter 5 . 9/20/2017
interesting and update soon
Blake2020 chapter 4 . 9/20/2017
cool
Blake2020 chapter 3 . 9/20/2017
nice
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 9/20/2017
good
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
great start
Wrabbit75 chapter 5 . 7/27/2017
An interesting story you got here (doubly so if it goes where I'm thinking it might, given that Fleur and Lily are having hot and heavy make outs, and you've outright stated that Fleur will be in Harry's harem). I really hope this wasn't abandoned, and we get to see some flashbacks of Harry growing up with an actual mother instead of the horror show that is canon. I'd especially like to see how Lily made it out alive and how she supplanted Snape as Potions master.
LiliumLuna chapter 5 . 6/29/2017
You know i really like it. Keep the work up
Guest chapter 3 . 5/30/2017
Well, the part about lili suck, do not like the suck part do not write stupidity. The part about james been a jerk also suck, sure blaime the death one,about pranking the little DE. The part about Ron, do not know... Lie it suck too, hermione get smack and ron get nothing. Do not know you ask for this but I am sure this is not what was ask.
Darkfang333 chapter 2 . 5/21/2017
Okay so might i ask what's up with the whole Neville thing.
TheRazgrizDragon chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
Awesome story; keep it up!
The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 5/5/2017
A good start for this story. A lot of this is off the grid and all the better for it.

There is a lot to understand and figure out, so I'm awaiting more.

TGM
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