|Reviews for Slip of the Tongue|
| GreenAndZen chapter 1 . 10/3
The fight at the beginning was so good! Their fights have such a sexy vibe to them. Jackie storming out three times. Coming back to kiss him. Then again to yell at him to pick her up. LOLOLOL.
I died when he blurted out what he'd been trying to deny since forever! And Jackie ordering him to say it again.
Some one-shots like these are so special!
| MJ chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Really good! Nice, short and powerful!
| Starlight77 chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Oh, nice and sweet! Liked it alot.
| Shinigami29 chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
awe... cute_ knew it would happen! just that there r SO many ways for it to happen:D and this is one of the best that i've read so far! please continue!
| Jenny chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
That was good. Great job!
| Rebecca15 chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
Great job! That was really cute how Hyde said it by accident and then he mumbled it after!
| xKatx chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
omg! for a short fic that was awesome! I couldn't help but go "uhoh" out loud when Hyde said that! great job! i think u should continue it tho! ;)
| holycitygirl chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
OOh I loved this. I added it to my favorites. I really think Kelso needs to be put in his place. I love Kelso's character but I really hate having to feel sorry for him when it comes to Jackie. He screwed up. I think he realizes that and that is why he's being such a jerk lately.
| Barbara chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
Thank you for this story! I love stories where Jackie and Hyde are happy together! Please write more!
| Candy.71 chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Aw that was really sweet. It was a little short though, but it was still really good! ;)
| hydejackie4ever chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Aw! That was just lovely. I really like your style of writing. Especially the way you incorporate Hyde's thoughts into the story.
| Cand chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Nice story! I did feel bad for Kelso, even though he deserved it lol. But Hyde was sweet, I love how Kelso's stories were pissing him off.
| L.J chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Kelso is such an ass, but a very funny ass!
I liked it a lot, I decided to take a break from my media homework and read some fanfic and your little story provided me with the much needed cheery attitude, thanks!
| twiniitowers chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Good story. And I agree with what you said about
writers not being shy-post your stories. I like
reading them before and after work.