Reviews for Ocean Dance
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2019
huge applause to you for this one - for an unusual idea that was executed gracefully and poetically (especially when it it could've reached hentai levels of weird and twisted lol) strong imagery and a solid piece of work through and through.
i did notice from the start that you tried really hard to not repeat words, but sometimes in a story that's okay, as long as doesn't sound repetitive. don't let switching up vocabulary distract the reader from the beautiful story itself.
i can't believe that i just wrote such a serious review for this, but seriously, great job. you got the potential to write great stories.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 9/27/2017
hmm very different and interesting I enjoyed it
luckyinugirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
Would it be weird if I said it turned me on?
Anguis Reginam chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
Oh was that was very hot! Thank you so muchj for posting
serenityselena chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
a very interesting twist :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
I imagine this would be a quite amazing experience. Good job.
Bisque-Ware chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
This was very well written.
Rikusolo84 chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
I love the idea of the ocean doing all the work like a hesitant lover but how is moana able to breath under the water?