Reviews for An Elf Fish Tale
Archiril chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Haha, nice ending :P

xXx Archiril
ShaolinQueen chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Aww, sweet! Love it!
yamina-chan chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
The last part made me smile for some reason.

Besides that, I -again- have to say that I like this Idea of yours
Manwathiel chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
Okay, I know this is really late to review, but it was so cute, I just had to! That was sweet how he still doesn't eat the fish! That's nice! You should have continued it!
Thrillzone chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
heheh. Cute! - Young leggy's always so clueless!
Gershwhen chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
This was darling. I loved Merry's aside to Pippin about "that must be inconvenient" - I could just see him thinking of having his own sire know the truth just by looking.
Your last line was a great wrap up!
Templa Otmena chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
That was so sweet!

I loved the transition between the present and the flashbacks to the past!

Sweet, sweet, sweet!
kingmaker chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Somehow, I imagine Legolas would have tried an alternative story for Thranduil anyway- he seems mischievous like that (or maybe I've just been reading TreeHugger too much). Nice little story though- and I can totally relate to Legolas not wanting to eat fish after seeing them live.
Ainaechoiriel chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
Another nice little story, and I like your characterizations of the Fellowship. Though we only saw some of them briefly, they seemed familiar, as they should. Thanks.
Puxinette chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
This is a great story! A wonderful 'young Legolas' story, without being sappy and fluffy. You have a way with words that makes the reader feel as if they are there, seeing what you are describing-hearing the sounds and feeling the emotions of the characters.

This passage is exactly what I am talking about: "Taking a small hand in his, he lead Legolas back to the pool where he took off his own boots, rolled up his leggings and picked the child up as he waded into the water. Feeling the small body begin to tremble against his chest."

Anyone who has ever held a small, frightened child cannot help but smile at this passage. Your words describe it exactly.

Great writing!
TrinityC chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
Sweet! Lovely to see a little glimpse of Legolas' past - well done!
PuterPatty chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
Cute, jenolas! I like it a lot. And it's so good to know Legolas wouldn't eat me! ::grin::

All kidding aside, I love your Fellowship. I do believe this is the first full Fellowship vignette that you've written, right? Will there be more? I think you do the Merry and Pippin very well. I especially enjoyed Merry's comment to Pippin about how elves knowing when other elves are lying must be inconvenient. Indeed! LOL

Very cute story. Great job!
Faerfaen chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
lol. I for one hate fish so me no hurt fishies!

*~* Dy *~*
Nilmandra chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Very sweet story - we have hobbits focused on their stomachs and a helfpul elf available to aid them! Nice childhood story about Legolas and portrayal of Thranduil as well.
Jocelyn can't seem to log in chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Aw! That's so cute! We must have another chapter about the fish they find in the morning!

That was a perfect little ficlet; I love stories like this. The characterization was flawless, and the visual descriptions had me seeing everything so clearly, especially the silver fish. I love the way you portray our little Legolas.

Looking forward to reading more from you.
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