Hows the rewrite going?

Then what's natsu's abyss dragon slayer secret art going to be man

Why does levy included in the harem? I think its okay for her if she's with gajeel.

I will be honest, the story is good and interesting but the grammar really sucks.

As for harem, maybe Juvia and Levy aren't needed because they have more chemistry with Gray and Gajeel.

Jenny,Hisui and Minerva kinda underrated so maybe you should add them

As long as Sayla’s still a member of the harem, it’s all right with me.

okay okay but hear my out add Juvia

I love your story author!

Am I the only one wondering why Natsu's dragonification hasn't started knowing that his dragon died and he couldn't do the dragon soul ritual to seal himself inside Natsu to create the antibodies?

so does natsu not have his dragon inside him making antibodies to prevent him from going full dragon? if so does his dragon look like red eyes black dragon from yugioh?

Awesome chapter.

Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.

Good chapter

Awesome chapter.

Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.

now erza trying to say don't attack laxus right after she was about to attack? after stopping Mira a first time just to make the point she was going to be the one to go attack him first.

what do you want your characters to be doing exactly? this confuses the situation pointlessly by breaking your own continuity.

this makes no sense for natsu to do whatsoever.
this entire chapter breaks character, both based off the og story and what you've written so far.
not to mention how out of Character the earlier sudden bout of self loathing and self pity in front of the group was