Reviews for Postal |
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![]() ![]() LOL, I love this story! I keep coming back to it to read the "You damn kids, I finally got ya!" part again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya! If I may make a suggestion: Try making paragraphs and stuff to space it out a bit, it would be so much easier to read. Other than that, the plot was pretty cool (it was very interesting to read a story from Filch's point of view for once!)and it held my attention. (a very good thing, because you do NOT want to know what I get like when I get bored!*grins*) Anyway, nice work on the plot, just remember the spacing thing, 'kay? *winks* bye bye! -K.D. Toling |
![]() ![]() crazy yet cool |