Hope you are doing well now and I hope you will update this story soon.

He 18 at this period of time right?

the author, or at least the current operator of the account is still kicking, having updated something in June of 2023

Please get better, take care of yourself.

Erm, there hasn't been an update since the covid reports... I can do without a new chapter, but are you okay?

Update?

I can't wait to see the next chapter hope you get well soon

The MC's hardcore dedication to preserving the plot has made him boring. I can understand it to an extent but he's ultimately just character that's only there for plot purposes, a side character.

Props to this Roman Torchwick for being able to put up with this asshat of a gamer system. Knowing that i'd be forced to follow a story progression and have my destiny decided for me would really grind my gears

Thank for for making this story, loved it all the way till this chapter. Way to leave a cliffhanger man. Understandable thou, life is a bitch on the best of times and when it decides to hit it takes time to heal and even after healing the energy just isn't there anymore.

Hope you got better.

2/10 MC isn't flushed out at all.

Unfortunate indefinite hold on this storyStill very good story
I love it
It really does seem like a plot was made with this and it wasn't all just winged (not saying those stories aren't good but they usually get either very boring or too many things happen at once and it kind of ruins it)

Dear god
There's two of them

God I love this

Cinder holding a candle to the forest fire thinking she's outshining it

The first arc is finished!
Hurray