Reviews for The Breakup Plan
Blue Lilybell chapter 5 . 4/2
LOL they make a sisterly chitchats about her breaking up with him, girl in a broken heart rule the world XD.
Thank you for updating, I'm looking forward for your next update!
Ghost reader chapter 5 . 3/29
Hi! Just a little review to say that I absolutely love your story! Your way of writing makes it so easy to picture everyhting. The characters are really in character that it makes me feel like I'm reading the manga. I wish you luck and I am looking forward to reading more from you! Thank you for sharing your work!
Greetings from France!
Joy-girl chapter 5 . 3/26
I was a wee bit confused by the timeline at the beginning of the chapter and why Kagura wasn’t kicking everyone’s ass since they drugged her. I’m not sure who the explosion was from though. Maybe Gintoki got Zura to help out and he’s going to be pissed too? But then that might take away from Okitas thunder. I do hope she gets to prove her awesomeness.
Excellent and fun writing! If Gintama were ever turned into a English book, I Good definitely see the narrator having this tone and humorous points. I always look forward to your writing - which also includes the next chapter. Thank you for updating!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/25
This is so good! I like it! Please update soon~ I cant wait to read another chapter
Aaawawawawawawa chapter 5 . 3/25
This is gold lol Im dying for update xD Too much of a cliffhanger lol Good job
Aria.sm chapter 5 . 3/24
HE CALLED HIJIKATA HIS BIG BROTHER! I've always thought that's the kind of relationship they have but have never seen anybody write Sougo being the one saying it. I just... I can't... it's to beautiful for me.
I absolutely love the plot, btw. Looking forward to the new one~
Thanks for sharing~
ramblingninny chapter 5 . 3/24
This is gold.
Yuyui Hime chapter 1 . 3/11
ahahahahaha ohmygosh this is gold!
Yuyui Hime chapter 1 . 3/11
ahahahahaha ohmygosh this is gold!
Blue Lilybell chapter 4 . 5/18/2017
Woaaa this fic is so great, the break up plan suddenly going to be the make up plan lol XD. Looking forward for your next update!
muguetmuse chapter 4 . 5/15/2017
Hahaha, I live for Gintoki being carefree on the outside and humorous, the "therapist" thing with Hijikata was slapsticky humor as well XD I'm very intrigued about Kamiyama being a spy and how the Shinsengumi's handling it discreetly and I gotta say, Hijikata yelling at Okita. there was applause. T'was a short okikagu interaction indeed but it pays well in its brevity because of all that tension and that dialogue served well to enhance that. Nevertheless, I'm enthusiastic to read what's to follow
Kira Hitori chapter 1 . 5/15/2017
pleaseee pleasseee update soon. this story is amazing
ChisatoHachirobei chapter 4 . 5/14/2017
Love this :) More OkiKagu pls!
Brieanna-c chapter 4 . 5/10/2017
I'm interested to see how they'll resolve their relationship, I'm really excited for upcoming chapters. :)
Brennya chapter 4 . 5/10/2017
For someone who doesn't know what she's doing, this sure is entertaining. Keep it up!
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