Reviews for Ben 10 and Star vs the forces of evil
Bobby Jenkins chapter 64 . 7/16
will azmuth and ben grandpa be part of moon flashback were they were younger and help moon meet eclipse and meet toffee also did azmuth create the wand just like he create the omnitrix and the sword because it be interesting.
Dragon storm chapter 64 . 7/14
I have a question are you going to divide the story into a series after you're done with Alien Force like I suggested earlier. I'm just sitting with 3 episodes left of Alien Force and three or four of those left in the second season of star vs the forces of evil we put your story of the 70 chapters that seems a little long I'm just asking because dividing it into a series but make it easier to read
Dragon storm chapter 64 . 7/12
Another great chapter. Also I think the Omniverse episode that guest was asking about wasn't rules of engagement I believe he was referring to catfight.
Gamelover41592 chapter 64 . 7/12
nice job on this chapter
StrongGuy159 chapter 64 . 7/12
Cool chapter continue please.
awsomerebel55 chapter 64 . 7/12
I wonder how Kevin is going to react when Ms. Heinous comes around looking for Princess Ben and Princess Kevin?
The fight will be a quick one if Ben goes all out.
Guest chapter 63 . 7/10
Here's an idea. Star in a princess battle royal for Ben's hand in marriage. Basically the princesses from other planets wanting Ben to be their husband and Star isn't having any of it. Also I also like the future BenStar kids and think they have the kind of relationship Ben and Gwen had as kids with Ben Gwen looking at the scene and where they have seen it before.
j.c chapter 63 . 7/7
your doing great keep it please
Guest chapter 63 . 7/6
well at least Ben regained Chromastone.
Dragon storm chapter 63 . 7/5
There are some things I like to say first thank for the new chapter. Second sorry about the gray typo I meant to say great. Third the episode idea for bride of Albedo was just a suggestion you can do with it whatever you want with it. Fourth to answer your question what should she do with it for Revenge he sent the love of her life to jail so she try to send the love of his life to the jail by framing her. And lastly I'm the one who suggested the cover art contest I do it myself but I don't have a devianart account and I'm not very artistic
StrongGuy159 chapter 63 . 7/5
Cool chapter continue please.
Gamelover41592 chapter 63 . 7/5
excellent work on this chapter I did not expect this episode :)
Dragon storm chapter 62 . 7/1
I was thinking maybe you'd like to do a original episode. I thought of one in and actually would help your story later on. I call it the Bride of Albedo- in this episode an old fling of Albedo's comes to Earth seeking Revenge after his supposed death at the end of Alien Force's final battle. How does she plan on doing this by posing as star by using some of stars DNA courtesy of a hairbrush and with a sort of a knockoff wand committing a few crimes and framing star for them. You're probably asking yourself how does this help the story later on in the Omniverse episode ultimate Heist Albedo managed to masquerade is Ben for several days now he was able to fool rook but he's only known been for maybe a few months but do you honestly think that would be able to fool his girlfriend where they've been together for over a year
camagassi72 chapter 62 . 7/2
So my issue is with magic of star and gwen while both of their magic are the same being living spirit engery since star can dip down to use wandless magic like gwen shouldnt she be able to do the spells and with the realm of magic and legerdomain are the 2 different magical dimensions which earths universe draws magic from. while mewni draws magic from the realm of magic only hence the queens have that butterfly form . while i would say anodites from both to because they literally evolve to beings of pure magic and its being shown in star and ben 10 magic is life/spirit energy . I understand it would be difficult for star to learn be she should get it soon plus it could help her in restoring the realm of magic. Or is mewni in a straight up different universe hence they dont draw from ledgerdomain Like earth dimension but earth and anodyne can draw from both realms of magic and ledgerdomain since anodites literally evolve to being made of pure magic and charmcasters people only evolve to use it no become anodites which makes no sense. Plus the writes of star cant make up their mind if mewni is another planet in our universe or a planet in a different universe.
Dragon storm chapter 62 . 6/21
Grey chapter as always.
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