Reviews for Serpentine
xbox432 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Oof, Harry overlooked that at the end. The unicorns were fine with Harry, his snakes, and the other animals in the area. They would only flee if they sensed danger. Harry REALY should have payed attention to that. I'm guessing it is whomever has the Diary? Also, yeah, they probably shouldn't forget that someone woke up Slytherin's monster, and wrote that message on the wall.

Also, I'm immensely curious if Dumbledor will ask for Harry's assistance in exploring/searching for the Chamber. Just seems silly to ignore its existence...

Lastly... Now that Harry knows the Marauder's nicknames, I wonder if he'll comment about "Moony" around the twins? Might make for a nice segue for them passing on the map now that they don't have the excuse of Harry being an incorrigible trouble maker.
codywhite162 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Glad to see this updated again! Loved reading this chapter and cannot wait to see what comes next :)
TheGrimDragon chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Was that who ever was possessed by Riddle at the end there?
Dragon-bait-2001 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
you also need to find a good way to bring Luna in. A good Luna always makes a story better.
Dragon-bait-2001 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
oooo an update so soon!
OrkinEX78 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Good to see you coming back to this story dude. Love your writing and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Rhys898 chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Yay, another chapter so soon! Keep up the good work!
griffin blackwood chapter 21 . 3/14/2023
Excellent
RegnartZ chapter 20 . 3/14/2023
It's so good to know that all your stories are still alive and you don't have to worry, we all know life can be weird so do the updates at your own pace, way better that way than just getting burned out and leaving everything. Good luck and take care.
jansesu chapter 20 . 3/13/2023
This story is great! I just binged it and I love the changes you made to the plot. It's nice to see a benevolent Dumbledore too.
Nanchih chapter 20 . 3/10/2023
Very much a change-up, but quite a believable one.
Hudy Leak613 chapter 20 . 3/9/2023
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
Jemma Blackwell chapter 20 . 3/8/2023
I have read this all in one go. It's a quite interesting story - a proactive Dumbledore is a very pleasant change.
kurama087 chapter 20 . 3/7/2023
you live, it's nice to see
XXX777 chapter 14 . 3/7/2023
When will the Dursleys face Justice for what they did to Harry.
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