I like it but why did you change Nyms age she was not a 2nd year in 91. I have no issue with it just curious

Thank you for not making dumbledore the greater good is all that matters asshole a lot of people decided on

I like this.

thanks

I'll admit I was considering dropping this story, since I'm reading so many and I'd forgotten quite a few details since it's been a while. But your writing just draws me back in and I remembered why I picked up this fic in the first place. The rune spoor was really cool and you can never go wrong with tonks interaction (although I realize its waaay to early for pairings). As I said in challenger, glad to see you back at it and thanks for the read.

I'm confused. Is Harry aged up, or are Dora and the Twins aged down? Other than that, I'm enjoying this so far.

Loved the Runespoor interaction!

This story is awesome, I really hope you continue writing it!

Been a while since I read a good HP fanfic. I like the addition of the fantastic beasts. Hope to see more of em as we progress and a bigger role for Selena.

This is really good and I'm hopeful about those character tags, other than that I hope Harry makes friends and he takes his security seriously. I always hate stories that write off Harry's placement at the Dursleys as if it was unnecessary or that any family that takes Harry in has to adjust their security to war time footing basically for all the time Harry is there. I'm even happier that Harry acknowledges that his placement at the Dursleys was for his security, I really hope that he has a moment when he gets angry and not crying angry but fighting angry over the fact that the people who required him to go there are still out there.

None of this make friends with Lucious Malfoy as the man is the reason why his terrible Childhood was necessary and the same Snape.

Aside from plot convenience, I can't fathom why Ron would be with Hermione on the train instead of Neville. Considering how cannon Rons attitude was, him associating with her wouldn't have happened normally. A somewhat less snobbish, bratish yr 1 Draco than the book? Interesting. Look forward to see your reasoning for those changes.

interesting story, you made nym a bit young. just a second year? I think you could have pulled off making her a 7th year, but certainly hard to create a relationship later.

I like the story and hope to read mote soon.

I don't really mind fics that bash Dumbledore, but it's nice to read other interpretations of him as well.

Having three heads could be very confusing, and I think you did a good job of showing that.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

A story that uses Fantastic Beasts stuff! Yessssss! I adore Fantastic Beasts and I love what you did with the Runespore and how they loved Newt. Thank you for writing! I came over here from Challenger and you do not disapoint!