Reviews for Serpentine |
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midnightscar17 chapter 5 . 11/24/2018 Please update soon |
Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 5 . 11/24/2018 Your choice, but like THE DELUXE fanfiction SUPER TRUNK, with so much space, not a very little MANSION house on the prairie, AND prarie, innet...IMO, the Scamander trunk and possibly Harry's future trunk, over the top, over the moon, TOO unlimited super magic capability. Funny seeing the review tweeting ERROR, in de-aging Nym. As I was thinking the opposite, SO MANY Harry ships, where authors keep HUGE AGE gaps. Sure in dozens of years won't matter. But for 17 year old Fleur or twenty something Nym, it adds more challenge/convincing readers, them smitten by a Harry, who is trudging toward midway point of his adolescence. Very fuzzy if was an author note about it. I clicked filters to PAIR Nym-Harry and this fic doesn't make the sifting. But then a majority of stories, with ships, if filter the shipped characters as PAIRING, the fics are rejected. I can only guess, authors error or reasons for not categorizing up the fic data for a pairing/ship. Particularly if future Nym-Harry 'romance' or friend zone pairing, in this fic. Absolutely nothing wrong, in de-aging Nymphadora character. For Flurry, I'll have Fleur turning 17 the night chosen, yep, birthday same day of month as Lilly/James deathday. She might not turn 17 until few hours AFTER her name chosen by Goblet, or ditto AND only turning 16 late that night. For Honks fics, at oldest, I'd have for say, TwT year 4 stage setting, with Nym a cadet, in her first year (2 months, or around 10 months if graduated end Harry year 2, ) of Auror training. As a metamorph, and fresh out of school, knowing (minus firsties) many Hogwarts 'faces'. Easy trope, auror cadet trainee is assigned, on the job training, among Auror security staff assigned to Hogwarts/Hogsmeade. Simple. While Harry might have reflex action to being touched or trapped. THERE IS the IMO, opposite effects. That once he's not freaking out, the wall cracked open(by Nym). A combo shattering and meltdown, as in deprived and STARVED of pleasant touches, affection ... an embrace/hug, he'd 'melt', be fine if were near neverending longevity. |
red2016 chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Great story. I saw some comments telling you to stop and work on challenger and I disagree. you should work on whatever you feel like writing. i personally enjoy most of your stories and i am always excited to see an update. keep up the great work and i hope to see another chapter soon |
Lelouch-Strife chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 i'm glad that your not making Dumbledore manipulative |
Ronin Kenshin chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 great work love your fic so far can't wait to see where ya take it |
Bonzenz chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Um im pretty sure Fred and George are younger than tonks |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/22/2018 Thank you for updating! |
lordonyx348 chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Thought I should let you know that it's Gryffindor, not Griffindor. |
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 It's good to see you writing nonetheless, no need for apologies. Waiting for the time when your inspiration for Challenger picks up again. Currently re-reading Traveler, so this update brought some hope. |
Phoenix Invictus chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 I'm glad to see this story isn't abandoned. Please keep at it, this story has too much potential to be left fallow. |
Derpeon chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 "Fred and George are a year ahead of me"... unless you de-aged Tonks I believe that statement is false. Fred and George are two years ahead of Harry and by the time Harry reaches his fifth year Tonks is an Auror while the twins are still in Hogwarts. |
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Glad to see you back, looking forward to classes and interaction with the student body. |
guhgiog08e9rhiogoiheg98whgiogo chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Great chapter, can’t wait for more! |
D C JoKeR H S chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Wah! I'm so happy to see an update! XD (And, ooh, I wonder how things will go when Harry finds the Chamber, obviously with Selena, but Ooooh! The Possibilities! XD) And I pray that we keep Grandpa!Dumbles for as long as possible! X'D There are too many Dumble-mash fics! We need more Grandpa Dumbles ones! XD |
Gensplejs chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Please dump the HHR pairing and make it Harry/Tonks. Otherwise this fic is awesome. |