Please continue. This is such fun!

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for. Please and thank you.

squeeling so hard right now. omg this is so cute

Yay! You’re not dead! Glad to get another update. I thought Marinette dalling on him was adorable and hilarious. I wonder if Chat will get a chance to check his messages and realize that Paris is unprotected, or perhaps the strange coincidence of who else left Paris..,
Not trying to tell you how to write your story, just speculating out loud here. ;P

Woo an update! I loved this chapter, how you introduce new people to create tension and drama. I can't wait to see Marinette stun Adrien with her outfits!

Wonderful work on this fic. I've really enjoyed reading it.

Wait, what if there's an akuma? Chat at Ladybug will both be gone!

It's a wonder that Adrien is as adaptable as he is considering how rigid his caretakers are. Definitely keep writing!

Haha they're worrying over a 12 hour disappearance! Priceless. Knock 'em out, Marinette! Can't wait to see Marinette turn heads (hopefully more than Adrien's!) at the beach. Nothing like a little harmless attention from someone else to stir up a slight case of jealousy. The scenery will do wonders for Marinette's inspiration.

Wait, wasn't this chapter here before? Did you re-upload it?

I LOVE THIS STORY.

You have their personalities to a tee, I love your descriptions, and I am a lover of long chapters as well and you certainly deliver!

I hope you update as soon as possible! Big Fan! 3

Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I've been without wifi for the past week, so I couldn't read or review. Oops, I'm wondering how this schoolwork-reveal is going to go.

Ooh-la-la, a trip to Saint-Tropez? Now that is my idea of a study date. Go get 'em, Marinette! Whew, they were that close to revealing themselves at the library, though it was hilarious that they had the same idea to transform and rush there as their alter-egos. Definitely keep writing!

Wow! I'm super excited for the next chapter. Marinette spending the entire day with her crush AND idol? I'm stoked on her behalf! That is, of course, if Gabriel allows it. But you wouldn't dangle such a tantalizing morsel in front of us dear readers only to snatch it away, would you? Would you? *puppy dog eyes*

*snickers* I can just picture Gabriel reacting to being cooped up in a plane with two teenagers. He'll probably lock himself in the cockpit just to get away from their yammering (even if they are discussing their schoolwork) and have some peace and quiet to design.

The only thing I didn't quite follow was the part where you had your akuma victim state "Hawkmoth says you're the ones who are lying" or something like that, but Hawkmoth never says that stuff right up front, he always butts in and interjects it during the fight. So the part I was a bit confused on was, I didn't read where Hawkmoth communicated with them about that (the butterfly outline on their face). That's really it. Your flow was fine and it didn't feel rushed at all.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Interesting. The entire time I was thinking Akuma.