Reviews for The Tinkerer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It is a shame this hasn't updates in years. It is really good. I will follow it just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() as long as you can keep it interesting for the next 57 years. |
![]() ![]() Please don't abandon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A single constructive criticism: Charing Cross Road. Only one r in Charing. Continuing excellent Rock On |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that you're fleshing out Goyle - he and Crabbe are really literary stick figures in canon. I ADORE everything Potions. I adore the explanations. If this stuff were real, I'd be front and center of a Potions classroom, drinking it all in. Is this complete? Because if it's not, PLEASEPLEASE come back and complete it! dear merlin I love this Rock On |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the broom backstory - an extra wrinkle of entertainment! AND THE POTIONS STUFF! heartheartheart rock on |
![]() ![]() ![]() So true. One must be loyal to another, or a thing outside of oneself. Can one be loyal to oneself? Hmmm... great story rock on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I ADORE this! So many loopholes that you've pointed out! rock on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only fics like this were dime a dozen instead of poorly written stupid teenager girl dreamy slash fics. |
![]() ![]() This is a really interesting work. I hope that updates will happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reliving past? Zabini might be abused! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember this chapter distinctly, from reading it years before. The potion-brewing, the exchanges with Hermione. The lines ring clear, after all this time. This truly is a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a shame this has been left un-updated for so long. This is a really good fanfic and i would've loved to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Note on your note: Anxiety of that nature is difficult to fully describe (so it can truly be internalized as a condition, rather than just the resulting behavior) to someone who hasn't experienced it, unfortunately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, For what it's worth, I've posted chapters that were 17K words and those that bare passed 3k. A chapter within a novel length tale should finish when you're finished describing a given action. Relating to your Author Note stating that you had more to include in the chapter but left it out (either for length or to meet some self-imposed deadline) neither is a good reason and it's foolish to mention it. cheers |