Reviews for The Tinkerer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter certainly isn't wasted. Harry & Hermione each just got an epiphany! They realized their magic had already trained their minds in what the Magical community thinks of as the side benefits of the Mindarts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It kind of came out of left field for me, but I also got an inkling that something was about to change from the moment you revealed that Cedric's broom was the very broom Harry rejected because its prototype plans were stolen from Tosha's Uncle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, of Harry would be more mature than his yearmates! In marketing his computer program, he's had to work with adults in the computer business industry as other 11- year - olds haven't yet. There lay the difference. They still think totally like kids. Harry has had experience of having to think like an adult. Good reading! |
![]() ![]() I have a feeling that this tunnel the fourth years took Harry through will prove itself useful for a time when Harry and his bosom friends need to escape from Hogwarts unknown and untraceable by the faculty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You may want to recheck the word prodigy in this chapter, it had too many vowels! Just so you know, this is actually a rereading by me of this story. Loving it! Love how Harry converted Hermione and Neville to the idea of Hufflepuff. |
![]() ![]() A map! |
![]() ![]() So it's good that Harry, Hermione, and Neville are going to be True friends, they can help each other through. |
![]() ![]() You should die in heel for the suprisecond ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Hermione getting equal credit? Harry did most of it. 99% of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ayyyyyyyyy I'm Pakistani hooorah |
![]() ![]() Nioce! Good start. Im gonna keep reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you expanded on the universe with...well everything, though the expansion of Hogwarts for more students is definitely my favourite of the lot. This is a story I'd wait forever for an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantástico! |