|Reviews for Fade to Black|
| ReaderOfAdventure chapter 1 . 1/19
I just read through this and absolutely loved it, I hope you come back to it one day! it's so well written and I love the personality of all the characters, I was a little hesitant of the big changes but you wrapped them so well.
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/13/2022
Honestly how dare her just think that Neji deserved what happened in the exams and then worry about herself when she micht have been unable to do her taijutsu. Honestly she for sure is a bitch. Shes the main one who needs to be humbled. At least Neji has a reason for his grumpy attitude while shes just a prissy asshole.
| Ricee chapter 4 . 7/11/2022
alright nope this already sucks ass. enemy ninja who want her and would endanger other kids at the orphanage? nope your just trying to force her to be near the nara
| AllySpark chapter 35 . 5/8/2022
I lover her and her guardians relationship it's so amazing
| Kh chapter 35 . 4/23/2022
How extraordinary. I was intrigued within the first few chapters and the story kept pulling me along. The mixture of cultures, the fact that they have ear coms but walk everywhere, bike shorts and ritual masks. I hope there are more books!
| hiro2protagonist chapter 1 . 3/22/2022
This is a good story. I usually don’t review but this one is good.
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/6/2022
eternal damnation to those who had wronged her
Is that a DOOM reference?
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 35 . 12/31/2021
loved it! can't wait for more! keep up the awesome work!
| Aki13S chapter 35 . 12/5/2021
woohoooo. i've done it. This is great btw. I hope to read more soon~~~~~
| FreelanceBum chapter 35 . 11/29/2021
Shoulda said "those who abandon their comrades are worse than trash" in that verbal shakedown.
| FreelanceBum chapter 8 . 11/28/2021
I can't remember if the one Maen saw actually was attacking or not. That blur may have been her father trying to rescue her.
| 1.6180339887498948482045868 chapter 35 . 11/25/2021
damn what a cliffhanger. fun story. i would have liked to see what happens with Kabuto.
| hpfan1987 chapter 35 . 10/26/2021
I love this story!
| random reader chapter 35 . 10/12/2021
Good story and plot. But the MC is one of SI-OC with worst personality that I've ever read. It's hard to enjoy the story with the MC's personality but the plot and changes is interesting.
| An Original Fan chapter 35 . 9/21/2021
this story. Back when you started rewriting Hidden Among the Shadows into Fade to Black, I was really iffy. I wanted to see the continuation of the story and didn't really know how much you could change from the original or make better that'd impact the story so significantly to make a rewrite. How wrong I was... The rewrite has been amazing and so incredibly much better. Every interaction with Maen or Shikaku is amazing, my favorite chapters are the one's where Kasumi and Shika get to have their one-on-one moments. Those two are so sweet! Practically siblings just not by blood. And then everything with Orochimaru! How Kasumi saved Sasuke and how that's rebounding now into him training with Gai... Or Kabuto's apparent interest now in Kasumi. I'm also super glad to see that our dear Kaka didn't end up going with Naruto and Jiraiya on their trip. While I'd love to see how the Akatsuki plays into this story more, I'm enjoying Kasumi's interactons with Kabuto, Tsunade, Kakashi and Sasuke. Interactions that'd be significantly limited if she left the village.
All in all, this story is golden! Every time I read your story, it makes me want to create one of my own from an old idea I've had. I'll always come back to this story and cannot wait until you update again, but take your time! No rush, because the longer the wait, the better the chapter. You've never failed to please. Good luck with anything going on in your life right now and really looking forward to the next update!