Reviews for Fade to Black
Spidersauce chapter 34 . 5/31/2020
Kasumi really needs one of these teachers to regularly beat the living shit out of her. She has someof the best damn senses in the entire village and yet she lets herself get startled and snuck up on constantly. She needs to have awareness beaten into her, or something.
Spidersauce chapter 28 . 5/31/2020
I really hope Kasumi gets good st some point. It's annoying with her basically at the level of her peers when she keeps going up against what may as well be gods.
I mean, I understand making her godlike as well is bad. Just the sad part about sticking to canon events as a guideline forces you to rely on plot armor to keep people alive.
Spidersauce chapter 26 . 5/31/2020
And this is why you don't tell people your max sensing range. Means they know exactly how far to be to stay out of your range.
Hopefully this will make her work to increase the range and keep it quiet.
Spidersauce chapter 22 . 5/31/2020
She snapped Zabuza's neck, not slit his throat like she told Shikaku. Minor detail but meh.
Also, yet another MC with a god complex. Pretty standard, but annoying.
Spidersauce chapter 20 . 5/31/2020
I just can't get over Naruto calling Kasumi "mama" all the time . . .
Spidersauce chapter 15 . 5/31/2020
Why the hell does Naruto call her Kaka and how does that even come about?
Spidersauce chapter 14 . 5/31/2020
Okay. The line where Kakashi bitches about how horrible being her teacher is gold.
Spidersauce chapter 13 . 5/31/2020
I'd be strongly tempted to fail the test on purpose. Assuming he's remotely like canon Kakashi is just about the worst possible sensei.
Spidersauce chapter 12 . 5/31/2020
Amuses me when people get Lee's name right but nobody else's. Sasuke Uchiha, Maen Nara, but Rock Lee. Everyone else you fuck their names up and do First Last, but Lee gets Last First, as is proper.
And it's funny how many authors do the same thing lol
Spidersauce chapter 6 . 5/31/2020
Yeah, reading a mature adult acting like a pathetic little kid is just painful for me. Mostly a good story otherwise . . .
Spidersauce chapter 5 . 5/31/2020
I really hope she doesn't act like a little kid much. Or at all. Never understood the fascination many fanfic authors have with making their reincarnated adult characters more childish than the actual children that surround them.
Granted, not saying it's necessarily -wrong- to characterize them that way. Just don't get why nearly every author does it.
GivemeRiddle chapter 35 . 5/25/2020
wow.. I’ll be honest, I’ve been avoiding this story because of a review I saw but I’m glad I didn’t skip it as I truly enjoyed this more than I anticipated. The character depiction for everyone is great, and usually when there are shorter chapters, I don’t anticipate a great story. Don’t know why, I’m prejudiced but I’m trying to get out of that mindset. Also helps that your naruto is less head-ache inducing than the last fic I read, in fact he’s almost bearable. Guess that has to do with Mc’s perception. What’s Kabuto up to? Will there be sasuke bonding time? Will mc learn Tsunade’s strength? Will she reciprocate adorable Shika’s crush? Ooof can’t wait to tune in for more hahah
Keep up the good work .
Gary chapter 25 . 4/12/2020
Your character is just a horrible person so I'm giving up reading this.
ForestShadeau chapter 35 . 4/6/2020
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
Please don't drop _
amylilac chapter 35 . 3/17/2020
glad kasumi got back into the groove of things :)
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