Reviews for DBZ:A Legendary Addition
Taeniaea chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
cool story
WitchDoc chapter 9 . 6/14/2017
Nice job mate just got to keep going
X3runner chapter 9 . 6/9/2017
Good chapter , personally I think goku chapters have a greater impact when his character is used sparingly it makes him look like a much more solid character but that's just my opinion.
WitchDoc chapter 9 . 6/9/2017
Why do you refer to Gohan as "the boy" so often (not flame) is it the way you write
WitchDoc chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
A chapter with goku on snake way is like filler so it's up to you but I wouldn't
bloodredmoon22 chapter 8 . 6/3/2017
Thanks for the chapter
WitchDoc chapter 8 . 5/30/2017
Your eighth chapter was a bit filler but it was important to the main characters storys don't ve so hard on yourself
X3runner chapter 8 . 5/30/2017
Do they know that they are not blood related?
WitchDoc chapter 5 . 5/20/2017
No problem is the final battle gonna be between Gohan and Arko that would be cool or at least they have to a serious fight after gohan beats cell Arko's legendary power vs Gohans teenage anger
X3runner chapter 5 . 5/11/2017
It seems that Arko and gohan have complementary personalitys it will be cool to see how they develop together potentially helping each other become more compleat individuals. Along with pushing g eacholther to become stronger.
WitchDoc chapter 1 . 5/10/2017
This is pretty good actually