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   Nebresh chapter 14 . 6/22/2018 some are real fun, some, I don't really get, but do keep on! |
| Nebresh chapter 11 . 6/22/2018 this is just beautiful! |
| KariTheFae chapter 10 . 6/2/2018 ARE YOU SGITTING ME, CRUMPLE HORNED SNORCACKS ARE CASSOWARIES, NOPE, I AM ON THE NOPE TRAIN TO NOPEVILLE, THOSE THINGS ARE EVIL INCARNATE. |
| Cemalidor chapter 14 . 4/23/2018 Ok, I think that's something I'd like to see expanded if possible. :XD |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/22/2018 Well then, this is pretty interesting... |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/22/2018 It's spelled prophecy, not prophesy, you should fix that. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/22/2018 legilimency, not Legilimancy |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 I liked the bit of worldbuilding, pretty neat, a shame it wasn't turned into a full story, would have loved to see Dumbledore getting his ass kicked by MI5 and MI6 after the deaths he caused. Makes sense to have Harry be vehemently against going to Hogwarts, to Dumbledore's chagrin, if Dumbledore stays alive that is. I would imagine him being a high priority target after the incident if a black ops department is lurking around somewhere. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 It's spelled prophecy, not prophesy. Noun vs verb |
| Treant Balewood chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 Interesting thanks for Writing |
| Godogma chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 Yeah, that was a mess... First you put Harry with Logan aka Wolverine and Professor Xavier and then had Albus ambushing MI5/MI6 agents to try and kidnap him before finally he was at Moira MacTaggart's for some reason... Since this is just a random ficlet I figure you won't go back and fix it but as it currently sits that's a big plot hole. The second one with time passing I could believe but directly contradicting yourself the first time really screwed things up. |
| Joe Fenton chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 Nice way to work the MCU into Harry Potter. Would love to see this developed. |
| Armiture chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 This is a good read and a new way to cross Marvel with Harry Potter. I like that a failed ritual put active X-genes in all Squibs and their descendents. I do wonder if perhaps the ritual had been meant to drain the millions of Squibs to enhance the power of The Dark Mistress. |
| Rubel chapter 14 . 4/22/2018 Neat. an interesting blending of the two franchises. makes me wonder if any of the more esoteric x villains will show like Apocalypse or Sinister. |
| Difdi chapter 13 . 4/4/2018 With that vassalage clause, I find myself wondering - how many Ravenclaws (to say nothing of Hermione) will have sworn fealty to Harry by the time he finishes eating breakfast? |