I like the Lynn and Clyde thing, something different then what people would expect. I don't see him just dropping Lincoln like, but I understand why you did it. I'm looking forward to where this is all headed.

Finally a ship that isn't Lori and Clyde!

Decent chapter. I admire the development of the characters. Lincoln and Clyde's broken relationship and Lynn trying to win Clyde's affection, their clearly being developed well as the chapters go on.

I hope you develop Lynn's crush on him a bit more, just so they don't come off as too sudden. Though I enjoyed seeing Lynn try to find Clyde with such determination, only to feel a little nervous when she actually talks to him. It feels like something her character would do and doesn't feel OOC.(Which is why a majority of the next chapter should be her POV in myo).

Amazing! I also can't wait for the third chapter! :-)

Ok, this is a decent story so far. Clyde's reaction to Lori telling him to back off is in character and I think it was a nice touch mentioning some of Lincoln's sisters feeling bad for him.
Lynn clearly cares, though if you want to not come off as to sudden for her feelings, you really should develop them and her so you avoid that.

It was a nice touch tieing in "Relative Chaos" and I have a feeling Ronnie Anne is going to show up for a visit and notice Lincoln with Janie(it really might add to the story if you add and develop sub-plots that go hand and hand with the main plot to seem more interesting)

As for the tragedy at the loud house, I wouldn't be surprised if Clyde not having the motivation to help Lincoln maintain peace there is the main cause.

On the sidenote you should make chapters longer, their good but could be better if you improve the length.

So far the story could really be interesting and I'm definitely intrigued, Lynn's crush on Clyde, Lincoln now being far away from Ronnie Anne, the supposed "tragedy" at the loud house, Clyde trying to get over Lori by joining a band, their all really cool ideas that could make this story worthwhile if you develop and expand on them more.
Looking forward until next time! :)

To be fair, Clyde's crush on Lori is creepy...

"Why does Lynn care so much about Clyde?"

Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! :-)

Off to a respectable start, seems like it will be a straight forward, but effective story!